There doesn't seem to be a way to show her "magazines or memory stick" is there some really specific command that I am not getting, that you need to use? Is it dependent on the clock? I do not get that at all. Even if I get through the game with the minimum amount of commands I still cant show her any porn after she "sleeps on it" there is no command for using or showing the magazine you cant even put the memory stick inside the computer. at best I got an answer that Emily doesn't need to see more porn despite not having seen any.
I also noticed the bug with "pull panties and pull up shirt" they bring you down to intimacy lvl 1.
You should make some sort of Demo walkthrough so we know what we can and cannot do. Include it as a read me file or something. Just to get people to learn the commands and what you are able to achieve in the demo.
The photo shoot for example is it in the demo or is it just a hint for things to come. At the very least improve the commands and give a change log so people don't get confused. The way to make a successful game is to tell what changes has been made and what they entail. This is especially important on text based games. quite hard to know the commands you want used. I do not know if the programs makes your choices limited. But the commands should be as close to what you want to have done as possible.
When Emily is done in the shower and you type x me while in the hallway it still says "lying (laying) next to sister in bed".
I have read that you were to be able to look through the keyhole removing something with the tweezers but that seems to be a lie too as there are no commands for the keyhole or bathroom door whatsoever.
If I am totally wrong please do pm me with answers if you can. I want to know about showing porn / contest / peeking / what in game time has an effect on, not just "it has an effect"
If anyone knows please let me know.
Aside from all that for my first look at an AIF game I am actually quite pleased at how you have made it. It shows a great deal of potential.
PS: I do not mean to come of as demanding for the stuff that I ask for. I am a patient person. Take your time, I respect that you might not have all the time in the world to work on this. Looking forward to playing the full game / fixed demo. If you need I can always help by playing it and telling you if I find some inconsistencies!