"Milly" by rkshooter

[wendyfan]

regarding "milly" what about the young girl becoming the teacher to all her friends, shes such a good learner and not scared to show others.

[Gib]

Hello all! New poster on the forum.
As it says at the top of the Milly saga you can post comments and propose ideas. I would first like to say that I am a recent reader but that meant that I had the chance to read the story so far as just one big continuity. That allowed me to see right away the running gag of the two principal protagonists not being able to be together in bed by themselves to "consummate" their love, mutual attraction, call it what you want.

I also noticed something that disturbed me. In all the previous episodes exept two of the latest ones, the tone seemed (to me, at least) to be lighter, warmer, with the expectation that everything was going to be all right (and very erotic!). But in episode 22 and 24, I had the impression that Milly fell into a trap. She was lured to a mansion by a false pretext, she was driven there in a limousine and she couldn't communicate to anyone she knows where she is. Furthermore I have my doubts about this Mr. Thompson's story about his wife's program. He seems to me to only be a control freak and much of a sadist.

I could cite numerous passages to illustrate my apprehensions but the list is just too long. I invite the reader to reread with a point of view of suspicion and judge by themselves.

Two possibilities exist:
Either this was just a little Sado-Masochist interlude, a phantasm that the author was exploring whith no long term consequences for our heroine or...

Milly, trusting young women that she is, has indeed fallen into the claws of a monster.

I am quite impatient to see if Ben will indeed make an apparition soon. I just fear that the new training methods that were talked about are just part of the plan to show Milly that Ben is not the man for her and that she is better off staying at the mansion as a toy in Robert Thompson's toybox. Somekind of brainwashing if you will.

I sincerely don't think that an eighteen year old girl, who didn't have the chance to have many lovers, needs a nipple enhancement, which, how those enhancements are to proceed is dangerous for blood circulation. Any kind of vacuum device is not to be utilized for hours at a time.

Also, I know a little about Keigel exercises and it's never done by clenching for two hours strait. That could have the reverse effect of "making her a better lover" and provoque vaginitis(pain from not being able to relax the muscles enough during penetration). And anyway, as I said about the nipples, I don't think a young woman such as Milly needs to do these exercises especially after the "doctor" (I really have my doubts about her professional abilities) said her "pussy" (what a good technical term!) was "tight... but not very strong". How could she know? She didn't take any sort of scientific measurement. The only thing apparent after her pseudo-exam is her preferences and they happen to coincide with her employer preferences. She is worried that her nipples are not firm enough and that her G-spot is too small. As I stated before, Young woman with little to no sex experience! And as I also stated, she is just eighteen(!), she hasn't finished growing yet and won't until around she is around twenty-five.

I have came to really like this character and would like for her to remain a sweet, loving, innocent, beautiful girl for as long as possible.

I hope that Ben can somehow save her from this hell (or someone else if you want to introduce another character). I know how he could find her should he become worried about not having news from her and realize that nobody else knows where she is.

Otherwise I wish that I just misinterpreted the situation and took everything too much at first degree or litteraly. But, in my views, love doesn't need control and a young woman should be able to make her own experience before a "mentor" makes her a "super-lover". What is the emergency? It is not as if she had came crying that she could not keep her man because she is lousy in bed and has a body that is going to hell!

If the author wants my suggestions for the next chapter, he can contact me.

I hope what I've written was clear, I tried to be concise, but I could have written a long time on this subject.

Thank you, I hope to have some feedback to this message.

Gib

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[Greebo]

Nice call Gib! You've touched on just the aspects of this otherwise funny, sexy little breath of fresh air of a story that have been nagging at me. Hopefully RKS is of a similar mind - I know from the small amount of creative writing I've attempted how stories can take on a life of their own and start following unexpected and, sometimes, undesired paths, but I'm looking forward to seeing how things develop anyway

[Gib]

Thank you Greebo for your reply. It is good to see that I wasn`t alone with my concerns. Since writing my first post I have fantasized so much on how the story could continue that it is almost sure that I'll be disappointed. Suffise it to say that I wish for a completely different direction than where the storyline seems to be headed. It would involve a new man in Milly's life. It would be mysterious and secret and it would make it so believable for making it difficult for Milly to be alone with Ben for long. Which of course would continue the running gag!(Hihihi!) And it would provide for a lot of occasion for sexual encounters.

I also am looking forward for the next épisode, but, as I stated before (and it seems someone else agrees with me), I ardently wish for a return to a storyline with a happy-go-lucky tone.

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Merci pour la réponse à mon premier message Greebo. J'avais peur d'être le seul qui s'inquiétait. Depuis que j'ai écris la première fois, j'ai tellement fantasmé sur la manière dont j'aimerais que l'histoire progresse que c'est presque sûr que je serai déçu. Je ne dirai seulement que je souhaiterais une direction complêtement différente de celle vers laquelle l'intrigue semble progresser. Il faudrait introduire un autre homme dans la vie de Milly. Ce serait mystérieux et pleins de secrets et ça rendrait très plausible les interruptions d'intimité entre elle et Ben. Ce qui, bien sûr, ferait continuer le "running gag"*.(Hihihi!) Et il y aurait beaucoup d'occasions pour des expériences sexuelles.

J'ai aussi hâte de voir la suite, mais, comme j'ai déja dit (et il semble qu'au moins un autre est d'accord), je souhaite ardamment un retour à un divertissement dans un ton plus insouciant.

*désolé, je ne connais aucune vrai traduction du terme. Le plus près que je pourrais traduire (sans élégance) est blague sans fin.

[Gib]

When reading post on Milly in the section Sexy girls, I made a connection with Milly`s predicament and the fate of girls in the slave-prostitution racket. I think that there are real similarities. These girls are lured by a false pretext. Same with Milly. They are then removed of their passport. Milly got her phone taken away. Nobody in their family knows where they are or what they are doing. Ring any bells? They are beaten and chained if disobedient. Hun-hun. They have never any privacy and their selfworth is plummeting. Troubling, no?

A parallel could be made also with how sect indoctrination works and what has happened. Confuse the subject, don't give them permission to think by themselves. Enroll them in a program to "better themselves". The guru appears at first benevolent and uses a lot of psychological manipulations on each individual. Then peer pressure applies. By the end the leader of the sect has control over the victims including their sexuality. Which more often than not he manipulates to his own advantage separating couples and building himself a harem.

Like I said before, I am worried about where the story is going.

[rkshooter]

Thanks for your comments but, is it not true that the world is full of predators? Please understand that this is fiction, taking liberties with some facts is not my concerns; I am not a doctor, lawyer or even some scholar just a person having a little fun on a computer.
Shark is kind enough to post the creations on his website. If I had no outlet and no feed back I would most certainly get board with it and probably stop. I take no offence to your comments but if this where set in a futuristic time frame and things were made up that are currently impossible would it make the story less enjoyable. If I have to make everything factually correct then there would be no time to create and it would be un-enjoyable for me. If you really feel strong about the story you can email me at rkshootertalk@cox.net or PM me through this site.

[Arnulf]

Hi Gib, my opinion is, that such hazardous developement is common for all serial stories. As author you are convinced to bring new and fascinating content into the stories. So it easy can bring the story or at least a figure within that story in a hazardous area, like it goes on with Milly.

Take as example the Horny Afternoon Game series: in HA2 we have the Nanny beginning to tolerate slightly sexuality from Wendy by making available her breasts. The members here began to call after more sexual activities for Nanny. According thereto we have the known increase of Nanny's sexual activities in HA3. Nanny, on the other hand is introduced as responsible for Wendy's good education and therefore equipped with a high grade of authority. Such function anyway does not comply with a sex monster, which many members now are calling for. That brings the author in a conflict.

Such developement we also can watch in real life. Neighbours learning knowing each other better and better, then they become best and thereafer close friends, the relationship grows closer and closer, until, mostly arising from a misunderstanding, this friendship turns bad and we have bitter enymies as result, followed by an all distroying neighbour-war with no or at least a few survivers.

[Gib]

Thank you both for your response to my comments. It is nice to know that at least people read them even if they don't agree.

Arnulf, I agree with most of what you have written exept that, as it has been pointed out, this is for entertainment purposes and it started in a much lighter tone.

And in fact we do agree that she is in a hazardous situation.

As I stated before, I would have no problem with all the trappings of S-M, but, from everything I know about that world, these people want to enjoy a good time with one another not impose their will. I often heard that it is the submissive that has the real control in the relation. They are voluntarily relinquishing control to the dominant for only a short period of time and are able to claim it back with just one word. The danger in this kind of relationship is when a dominant on an ego-trip doesn't understand the rules and indulges his every whims. Plus in this case there is the added context of the program and everything that goes with it.

If Milly is going to become a sex-machine for the pleasure of man then can we agree that she will have lost the sweetness and romantic side that was a staple of the character and the series till now? As in your example of Nanny, won't that be contrary to the essence of the character. For my part, I would like to go back to the "funny, sexy little breath of fresh air of a story"(Greebo).

Mr. Shooter, It is true that predators exist in real life but I do not have to like their depredations, specially against a character I have come to like very much.
The sections in my first post citing technical issues were there just to illustrate why I have doubts about the Thompson character's intentions and to voice my disapprobation about the emphasis put on those parts of a young girl's anatomy. Those passages were supposed to have been removed when I replaced a lot of others by the paragraph stating that the examples would be too numerous to mention. Although I find that stories that can provide us with learning something at the same time is a plus, I agree with you that entertainment can be it's own reason.
I will send you a PM to tell you about my suggestions and I will respect your decisions concerning Milly's future. If I don't like what I'll see, I'll always have the option of not reading anymore. Which would be too bad.

[buddah69247]

Hey RKS any idea on when the episode is going to be done. I know you'vu been busy with work and your family. I'm just curious

[TLSMAGIC]

I just recently found this site and the Milly series. still trying to figure out how to get anything else in English.
I find the story line very interesting. I'll make a few suggestions at the end of this post and will send you an email with more detail RIK
I really enjoy how close Ben and MIlly get before they get interrupted each time. Personally I hope they never do actually get it done as it would almost make it seem like that should be the end of the series. Besides I consider Ben a lecher. I don't remember exactly but I think he has sexually intimate with 5? ladies so far? Susan, Gracie, Lisa, Mixie and Krista?
poor Millie's only real exp so far with a guy was when she learned to give head to Mr Thompson.
personally I hope when she finally ( officially- since her hymen can't be intact by this point) loses her virginty it isn't to Ben. I can see her losing it to Robert as part of her training ( see below) but suggest a new guy not yet shown appears in the future and has the pleasure of being her first. Would make a great jealousy angle
I'm looking forward to future episodes and hope the twins make a return ( I expect them to show up at Roberts to assist in the "training". )
a few ideas you might want to think about
1- since she has already performed orally on Robert, I would think she would again be performing it in the next chapter or two. I see Janice ( or the twins) continuing to get her all aroused and hot but not allowing her to climax. Then when she begs for release- he offers himself to her and she performs fellatio for the second time. He then says that she needs to practice it and she ends up servicing him several times a day. you know the saying "Practice makes perfect"
I can see her being constantly aroused also leading to another dream sequence- this time involving Ben and Robert and maybe Janice and/or the twins
If the story line actually goes the way of Robert taking advantage of his control over Milly I can give you a sequence of events that I used in a story once years ago. mini version of event - he convinces her she needs to practice holding a real cock inside her instead of the dildo. He goes in as deep as he can and she tries to hold it ( but that same lubricant suppository is used so she can't hold him in) Everytime he slips out, he says she has to do it again. He continues penetrating her and pulling out until he almost ready to lose control. He then lays down and orders her to get on top and she is to push herself down onto him and then try and hold him as she pulls back. What she doesn't know is the entire thing is being filmed and anyone that looks at the film later will see a girl participating in intercourse.
there are alot of plats that can be used. She is out of High school but she may still have friends and activities at school. I'm sure at least a few of the male teachers or jocks from the school have the hots for her.
Just some ideas. If you want more let me know. some years back I accepted a bet that I could write better x rated stories than was showing up on some sites. I own the bet and have written quite a few since. At least 2 that I can remember would work good for Milly and if I can find where I put them I will send them to you Rik. You would just have to change the names

[shark]

Really good !
I think that you could have also very good ideas for a game scenario.

[TLSMAGIC]

heck I'm still trying to figure how to get past rubbing the breast on hot sands 1

[Gib]

Personally, I don't like the idea of Milly being penetrated by that manipulator Robert Thompson. To me it would be too much like rape as I have already problems with what is happening rignt now. I much prefer the idea of a new male character to spice things up, though. Even when Milly is still so in love with her Ben. A lot of different things can happen to make that possible.

[Arnulf]

The Milly-story has such as a central thread, that is the unsatisfied strieving to real and undisturbed sex between Mily and Ben. To bring new ideas in the story is probably necessary, we all want to see sexual action and the fulfilment of the final aim would consequently ending the story bow.

Personally I cannot follow the kind of "education" , which is ongoing in the moment. As to my feelings such things are qite out of sexual reality, Gib, you made your comments already and I only can agree fully. Sexual phantasy can go far and unconventional ways but it always remains a thing of agreement between the partners and closes out any dominance. (Sado-Maso is no example, because it is always entered by basical agreement and in the most cases there is agreed a key to cut the action, if a partner taxes it as necessary.) Therefore we should not let Ben out of sight, it would corrupt the entire idea of the series.

[Gib]

Glad you agree that a good sexual relation is with the agreement(both sense of the term) of the participant.

I never intended to let Ben out of sight, only to give him a little competition. He has his out of relationship trists, why should Milly not have the same priviledges?

I don't know if you understood that I wanted the exchanges between Ben and Milly to cease. I can assure you that was never my intentions to convey. I only wanted to give a new reason why their relationship could not have their final achievement. I have many ideas along those lines, some of which I already shared with Mr. Shooter. Time will tell if he liked the suggestions.