Office night with Angela - comments and dialogues

[shark]

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Here are indications on the dialogues I imagine...
Who wants to work on the correct translations? (english, italian......)


Comments before the beginning of the game:
- il est tard, ce soir, lorsque tu quittes le bureau. La journée a été longue et éprouvante…
- ( It's late, this evening, when you leave the office. The day was long and you’re tired)
- pourtant, tu remarques qu’un bureau est encore occupé, c’est celui d’Angela, la nouvelle secrétaire…
- (Nevertheless, you notice that an office is still occupied, it's Angela's office, the new secretary …)
- pourquoi ne pas lui rendre une petite visite? C’est une fille sympathique et mignone. C’est le moment de faire connaissance.
- (Why not to do a small visit to her? It is a nice and pretty girl . It is time to get acquainted.)


in the angela’s office, beginning of the game:
- joueur : bonsoir Angela, encore au travail? Il est tard pour rester seule ici .
- (gamer: Good evening Angela, still at work? It is late to remain alone here.)
- Angela: oh, bonsoir...c'est vrai qu'il est tard... je dois finir ces dossier, mais je suis vraiment fatiguée
- (Angela : Oh, good evening... it is true that it's late ...I have to finish these files, but I am really tired...)
- joueur: je comprend cela… je peux vous aider à vous détendre un peu…
- (gamer : I understands it… I can help you to relax a little …)


after the first shoulders massage:
- angela : hmmm, ça fait tellement de bien…
- (angela : Humm, that makes so good …)


after the gamer dim the light:
- angela: quelle bonne idée… la lumière est vraiment très agressive dans ce bureau…
- (angela : What a good idea ...the light is really very aggressive in this office …)


after the gamer fires the candle:
- commentaire: excellente idée, cette bougie parfumée va aider à créer une athmosphere plus…intime…
- (comments : Excellent idea, this fragrant candle is going to help to create an athmosphere more … intimate …)


Angela removed her skirt and takes place in front of the desk:
- angela: Je ne sais pas si ce que nous faisons est très sérieux, mais c'est vraiment très excitant… Pourvu que personne ne nous surprenne, j'aurais vraiment trop honte...
- (angela : I don't know if what we are doing is very serious, but it is really very exciting… If somebody surprised us, I would really be too much ashamed...)


Gamer tickle Angela with the flower, she pees her panties:
- Angela : oh mon dieu ! j'ai mouillé ma culotte !... j'ai pissé dans ma culotte comme une petite fille... J'ai honte... Je suis vraiment une sale gamine...Je mériterais une fessée....
- (angela : oh my good ! I've wet my panties !... I pee my panties like a little girl...I am really shameful... I'm a dirty girl...you should have to spank me...)


After the spanking:
- Angela: whaouuu! mes fesses sont brulantes... ! ... et le reste aussi... ... j’ai besoin de m’asseoir un moment…
- (angela : waouuuu ! my butt hurts… And I am hot somewhere else also…I need to sit down.)


I think that the continuation needs no dialogues ( sound will be more explicit....)

[funny]

shark! I think those are all good suggestions from start to finish. I am a bit busy these next few days, but will try to translate these more on Friday...

[ClaudioP]

I'll translate it in Italian during the week-end.

[shark]

Thank you both

[funny]

It will probably be the weekend for me too now... but I am here!

[ClaudioP]

Comments before the beginning of the game:
- FR* il est tard, ce soir, lorsque tu quittes le bureau. La journée a été longue et éprouvante…
- UK* It's late, this evening, when you leave the office. The day was long and you’re tired
- IT* Questa sera è tardi quando esci dall'ufficio. La giornata è stata, al solito, lunga e faticosa...

- FR* pourtant, tu remarques qu’un bureau est encore occupé, c’est celui d’Angela, la nouvelle secrétaire…
- UK* Nevertheless, you notice that an office is still occupied, it's Angela's office, the new secretary …
- IT* Ti accorgi che in ufficio c'è ancora qualcuno. È quello di Angela, la nuova segretaria...

- FR* pourquoi ne pas lui rendre une petite visite? C’est une fille sympathique et mignone. C’est le moment de faire connaissance.
- UK* Why not to do a small visit to her? It is a nice and pretty girl . It is time to get acquainted.
- IT* Perché non farle visita? È una ragazza carina, potrebbe essere un buon momento per fare conoscenza.


in the angela’s office, beginning of the game:
- FR* joueur : bonsoir Angela, encore au travail? Il est tard pour rester seule ici .
- UK* player: Good evening Angela, still at work? It is late to remain alone here.
- IT* giocatore: Buona sera, Angela. Ancora al lavoro? Non è troppo tardi per restare qui da soli?

- FR* Angela: oh, bonsoir...c'est vrai qu'il est tard... je dois finir ces dossier, mais je suis vraiment fatiguée
- UK* Angela : Oh, good evening... it is true that it's late ...I have to finish these files, but I am really tired...
- IT* Angela: Oh, buona sera... so che è tardi... dovrei terminare questo lavoro ma non riesco più a concentrarmi...

- FR* joueur: je comprend cela… je peux vous aider à vous détendre un peu…
- UK* player: I understands it… I can help you to relax a little …
- IT* giocatore: Capisco... se vuoi, posso aiutarti a rilassarti un po'...
(Note: better to change this: If you wish I could get you relaxed so you can continue better...)

after the first shoulders massage:
- FR* Angela : hmmm, ça fait tellement de bien…
- UK* Angela : Humm, that makes so good …
- IT* Angela: mmmmh, è molto piacevole...


after the gamer dim the light:
- FR* Angela: quelle bonne idée… la lumière est vraiment très agressive dans ce bureau…
- UK* Angela : What a good idea ...the light is really very aggressive in this office …
- IT* Angela: mi piace... quella luce è molto forte e mi dava fastidio...


after the gamer fires the candle:
- FR* commentaire: excellente idée, cette bougie parfumée va aider à créer une athmosphere plus…intime…
- UK* comments : Excellent idea, this fragrant candle is going to help to create an athmosphere more … intimate …
- IT* commento: ancora meglio! Questa candela ha un profumo inebrianre e aiuterà a migliorare l'atmosfera... rendendola più intima...


Angela removed her skirt and takes place in front of the desk:
- FR* Angela: Je ne sais pas si ce que nous faisons est très sérieux, mais c'est vraiment très excitant… Pourvu que personne ne nous surprenne, j'aurais vraiment trop honte...
- UK* Angela: I don't know if what we are doing is very serious, but it is really very exciting… If somebody surprised us, I would really be too much ashamed...
- IT* Angela: Non credo che quello che stiamo facendo sia corretto. Ma mi eccita molto... Se qualcuno ci scoprisse potrei morire di vergogna...


Gamer tickle Angela with the flower, she pees her panties:
- FR* Angela : oh mon dieu ! j'ai mouillé ma culotte !... j'ai pissé dans ma culotte comme une petite fille... J'ai honte... Je suis vraiment une sale gamine...Je mériterais une fessée....
- UK* Angela: oh my good! I've wet my panties! ... I pee my panties like a little girl... I am really shameful... I'm a dirty girl...you should have to spank me...
- IT* Angela: Oh, no! Mi sono bagnata! ... Me la sono fatta sotto come una bambina... Non mi sono comportata bene... Sono una ragazza cattiva... Dovresti punirmi...
(Note: I do not like this part of the game)


After the spanking:
- FR* Angela: whaouuu! mes fesses sont brulantes... ! ... et le reste aussi... ... j’ai besoin de m’asseoir un moment…
- UK* Angela : waouuuu ! my butt hurts… And I am hot somewhere else also…I need to sit down.
- IT* Angela: Ahi! Il mio sedere brucia... e sono diventata molto calda... ho bisogno di sedermi.

[shark]

Good work...
It is very exciting to imagine Angela speaking Italian

[WInterbay]

I'm going to snip the french and italian parts and see if I can get the english grammar to be a little better at the places I think it sounds strange (since my native languge is Swedish I will probably miss something and probably make a mess of something else...)
I'll also see if I can try to do a start on a german translation some time next week (can't promise anything though)...
My coments are in italics.

Comments before the beginning of the game:
- FR* il est tard, ce soir, lorsque tu quittes le bureau. La journée a été longue et éprouvante…
- UK* It's late, this evening, when you leave the office. The day was long and you’re tired. I don't think you need those , in english

- FR* pourtant, tu remarques qu’un bureau est encore occupé, c’est celui d’Angela, la nouvelle secrétaire…
- UK* Nevertheless, you notice that the lights are still on in one of the offices. It's Angela's office, the new secretary …To me this sounds better but it might be just me

- FR* pourquoi ne pas lui rendre une petite visite? C’est une fille sympathique et mignone. C’est le moment de faire connaissance.
- UK* Why not pay her a visit? She's a nice and pretty girl. It's about time you got acquainted. Same as above

in the angela’s office, beginning of the game:
- FR* joueur : bonsoir Angela, encore au travail? Il est tard pour rester seule ici .
- UK* player: Good evening Angela, still working? It's getting rather late and you seem to be alone in working this late. I don't know what to do with this one but this sounds better to me at least...

- FR* Angela: oh, bonsoir...c'est vrai qu'il est tard... je dois finir ces dossier, mais je suis vraiment fatiguée
- UK* Angela : Oh, good evening... it's true that it's late ...I have to finish these files, but I am really tired...No comment other then if you use ':s then you better do it throughout...

- FR* joueur: je comprend cela… je peux vous aider à vous détendre un peu…
- UK* player: I understand… Maybe I can help you to relax a little … "I understand" could be replaced with "I can undersnd that" as well
(Note: better to change this: If you wish I could get you relaxed so you can continue better...)

after the first shoulders massage:
- FR* Angela : hmmm, ça fait tellement de bien…
- UK* Angela : Humm, that feels so good …Massage feels good, or at least that is the verb I use

after the gamer dim the light:
- FR* Angela: quelle bonne idée… la lumière est vraiment très agressive dans ce bureau…
- UK* Angela : What a good idea ...the light really is very aggressive in this office …I think the emphasis sounds better with "really" in that place

after the gamer fires the candle:
- FR* commentaire: excellente idée, cette bougie parfumée va aider à créer une athmosphere plus…intime…
- UK* comments : Excellent idea, this scented candle is going to help create a more … intimate athmosphere … I think candles with perfume are called scented and the placement of atmosphere makes more sense after intimate

Angela removed her skirt and takes place in front of the desk:
- FR* Angela: Je ne sais pas si ce que nous faisons est très sérieux, mais c'est vraiment très excitant… Pourvu que personne ne nous surprenne, j'aurais vraiment trop honte...
- UK* Angela: I don't know if what we are doing is very serious, but it's really very exciting… If somebody discovered us, I would be very much ashamed... Don't know if the "really" should move as above but the last sentence makes more sense now at least.

Gamer tickle Angela with the flower, she pees her panties:
- FR* Angela : oh mon dieu ! j'ai mouillé ma culotte !... j'ai pissé dans ma culotte comme une petite fille... J'ai honte... Je suis vraiment une sale gamine...Je mériterais une fessée....
- UK* Angela: oh my god! I've wet my panties! ... I've peed my panties like a little girl... I feel really shameful... I'm a naughty girl...you should have to spank me...
(Note: I do not like this part of the game) Me neither... And it's hard to make it sound right... Anyone else got any ideas?

After the spanking:
- FR* Angela: whaouuu! mes fesses sont brulantes... ! ... et le reste aussi... ... j’ai besoin de m’asseoir un moment…
- UK* Angela : Oww! My butt hurts… And I'm hot somewhere else too… I think I need to sit down.
Or something...

[shark]

be welcome, Winterbay and thank you for your work...

[funny]

Thanks everyone for their help! Here are my suggestions for the English version, I think we should keep working on these till we get something we are all happy with, always good to try. I will put my responses in bold

Comments before the beginning of the game:
- il est tard, ce soir, lorsque tu quittes le bureau. La journée a été longue et éprouvante…
- ( It's late, this evening, when you leave the office. The day was long and you’re tired)
It's been a long day at the office, and you are ready to relax...
- pourtant, tu remarques qu’un bureau est encore occupé, c’est celui d’Angela, la nouvelle secrétaire…
- (Nevertheless, you notice that an office is still occupied, it's Angela's office, the new secretary …)
On the way out you see that someone else is also working late...you are happy to see that it is Angela, the new secretary...
- pourquoi ne pas lui rendre une petite visite? C’est une fille sympathique et mignone. C’est le moment de faire connaissance.
- (Why not to do a small visit to her? It is a nice and pretty girl . It is time to get acquainted.)
You have been wanting to meet her, but never knew how, you decide to stop in and see how things are going...

in the angela’s office, beginning of the game:
- joueur : bonsoir Angela, encore au travail? Il est tard pour rester seule ici .
- (gamer: Good evening Angela, still at work? It is late to remain alone here.)
Hi Angela, I see you are working late too, I think we are the only ones left
- Angela: oh, bonsoir...c'est vrai qu'il est tard... je dois finir ces dossier, mais je suis vraiment fatiguée
- (Angela : Oh, good evening... it is true that it's late ...I have to finish these files, but I am really tired...)
Oh, hi! I know, I don't think I am ever going to finish all this work! I really need a break to relax...
- joueur: je comprend cela… je peux vous aider à vous détendre un peu…
- (gamer : I understands it… I can help you to relax a little …)
I know how it is, can I offer you a massage?

after the first shoulders massage:
- angela : hmmm, ça fait tellement de bien…
- (angela : Humm, that makes so good …)
MMMmmm, you are very good at massages

after the gamer dim the light:
- angela: quelle bonne idée… la lumière est vraiment très agressive dans ce bureau…
- (angela : What a good idea ...the light is really very aggressive in this office …)
Oh, that is much nicer, thank you.


after the gamer fires the candle:
- commentaire: excellente idée, cette bougie parfumée va aider à créer une athmosphere plus…intime…
- (comments : Excellent idea, this fragrant candle is going to help to create an athmosphere more … intimate …)
Oh thank you! That smell of that candle always helps me relax

Angela removed her skirt and takes place in front of the desk:
- angela: Je ne sais pas si ce que nous faisons est très sérieux, mais c'est vraiment très excitant… Pourvu que personne ne nous surprenne, j'aurais vraiment trop honte...
- (angela : I don't know if what we are doing is very serious, but it is really very exciting… If somebody surprised us, I would really be too much ashamed...)
I always dreamt this would happen to me one day, I just hope noone sees us!

Gamer tickle Angela with the flower, she pees her panties:
- Angela : oh mon dieu ! j'ai mouillé ma culotte !... j'ai pissé dans ma culotte comme une petite fille... J'ai honte... Je suis vraiment une sale gamine...Je mériterais une fessée....
- (angela : oh my good ! I've wet my panties !... I pee my panties like a little girl...I am really shameful... I'm a dirty girl...you should have to spank me...)

Oh my God! I have wet my panties, I got too carried away. I have been naughty, and now I need a spanking!

After the spanking:
- Angela: whaouuu! mes fesses sont brulantes... ! ... et le reste aussi... ... j’ai besoin de m’asseoir un moment…
- (angela : waouuuu ! my butt hurts… And I am hot somewhere else also…I need to sit down.)
MMMMMMMmmmmm that taught me a lesson. I am going to have a seat and see what else we can do...


I think that the continuation needs no dialogues ( sound will be more explicit....)

[shark]

great . that's a very personal work...

[funny]

Thanks.

Dialogue is harder than I thought, I am going to be more careful to critisize things I hear on t.v.!

[Vitalista]

If you want, I can translate the dialogues into Spanish...

[Ironside]

.. and I can translate it into danish, if you like..

[shark]

I still need some sentences for the game end (English correction and Italian translation) thank you for your help.

Choice
Angela:Hummm....C'était vraiment très agréable... Maintenant, tu sais, j'ai très envie de toi...
Angela:Hummm....It was really very pleasant... and now, I'm very hot and I want you…

First end
Angela:Ok, viens...Je suis vraiment trop excitée...
Angela:Ok, come on... I am really too much excited...

Second end
Angela: Ok...Je veux bien essayer par derrière... mais si tu vas tout doucement...
Angela:Well... I'm ok to try to do it from behind, but if you go very slowly...

Third end
Angela:Ok...je suis certaine de savoir ce que tu aimes...
Angela:Ok...I am sure to know what you like...

Angela:He ! on dirait que tu as vraiment aimé ça....
Angela:Hey ! It looks like you really liked that....



Game end
Bravo, tu as terminé le jeu...Angela doit finir ses dossiers mais tu sais que tu peux la retrouver si tu en as envie...
Good, you ended the game... Angela has to finish her files but you know that you can find her if you want...

Tu peux aussi retrouver toutes ses copines sur le site:
You can also find all her friends on the site :

Ont participé à la conception et à la réalisation de ce jeu:
They have participated in conception and realization of this game: