I need help for a new game...

[shark-admin]

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Hey guys , I need your help for a new game...

It will be named "horny afternoon" and it's almost finished.
But currently, there is only the French version and I need you for the English texts...

I introduce the game:

Wendy is a young and pretty girl in a rich and respected family.
She received an excellent education in a boarding school and joined the family house for the holidays...

Nanny, the housekeeper, attends to keep the luxurious house in order and to watch over the girl during the frequent times when her parents are absent...
The house is pleasant... but wendy is bored... She would like to meet other young people at the near village, but her parents don't authorize it... "A good educated girl does not frequent unknown people"...

This afternoon, the girl awaits her piano lesson . Idle, she lets run her fingers on her body and becomes quickly very horny ...
The player have to control the girl's desires and movements until the arrival of her charming piano teacher...(and during the special "piano lesson", of course)
Wendy is a very sensual girl... but you have to be careful, Nanny takes care...

I wrote fast English texts (certainly very incorrect) but I need the work of those which know this language well.
you are not obliged to translate exactly my text, we can have more personal versions...
The characters are strict and educated people and must speak with very correct manner.

I would be happy also if somebody could propose a German version. Germany is the country which has the most visitors on my site after the states...

of course, those which will take part in this work will have their name registered on the game...

if you are interested, you will find the texts, with some images of the game, on this page:

http://www.sharks-lagoon.fr/extern_file ... texts.html

I hope for your assistance

thank you friends...

[rich13]

Shark how about a second version where the piano teacher is a female and the girl and the female teacher get it on.. Just a thought..

[taz]

il as l'air bien simpa vivement que le jeu soit fini

bon courage !

[lemoncurry]

I made some edits to what I thought you were trying to convey and edited for grammar and whatnot. Too many ellipses (...) can be distracting.


"HORNY AFTERNOON"


1 - GAME PRESENTATION

Wendy is the pretty, young girl of a rich and respected family.
She received an excellent education in a boarding school and returned to the family house for the holidays...

Nanny, the housekeeper, keeps the luxurious house in order and watches over the girl during the frequent times when her parents are absent...
The house is pleasant... but Wendy is bored. She would like to meet other young people at the nearby village, but her parents don't allow it. A well educated girl does not associate with unknown people.

This afternoon, the girl awaits her piano lesson. Idle, she lets her fingers roam on her body and quickly becomes very horny...
Will you be able to control the girl's desires and movements until the arrival of her charming piano teacher?
Wendy is a very sensual girl, but be careful! Nanny is watchful…




2 - PROLOGUE

Wendy: "Nanny, I would like to go to the village to meet some young people my age. I haven’t left the house since the start of the holidays.”

Nanny: "I don't think that it is a good idea, Miss Wendy... The education you have received does not make it possible for you to associate with these little villagers..."

Wendy: "Oh, Nanny, please! I am 18 years old now, and because I spent those long years at the boarding school, I don't have any friends."

Nanny: "I am sorry, Miss Wendy, your parents do not allow it, and you have your piano lesson this afternoon. I prepared some hot milk for you. Call me if you need anything else."


3 - NANNY RETURNS TO THE LIVING ROOM


Nanny: "Is everything alright, Miss Wendy?
Your parents called; they will not return until late this evening.
This means you will be alone for dinner, and you will also be able to get to bed early to be rested for your aunt’s visit tomorrow. Don't hesitate to call me if you need something."


4 - NANNY SURPRISES WENDY IN AN INDECENT POSITION

FIRST SITUATION
Nanny: "Miss Wendy! What is this behavior?
Do you really think that this position is correct for a well educated girl? I am ashamed of you!
Your behavior is unacceptable! Please go up to your room immediately!

SECOND SITUATION
Nanny: "Miss Wendy! What are you doing with that?
This book belongs to your father and is absolutely not intended for young girls! How perverse! Your behavior is unacceptable! Please go up to your room immediately!


THIRD SITUATION
Nanny: "Oh my goodness gracious! What are you doing, Miss Wendy??
How indecent! Have you gone crazy? I have never been so ashamed in my life!
Your behavior is scandalous! Get dressed and go to your room immediately!"


5 - PIANO TEACHER ARRIVAL

Nanny: "Miss Wendy, your piano teacher has arrived.
Your music lessons will supplement your good education, and this young man has all abilities to make you a virtuoso!
I leave you to your lessons. Be a studious pupil."


6 - PIANO LESSON

Teacher: "Relax... You are much too tense."


7 - NANNY SURPRISES WENDY AND THE PIANO TEACHER

Nanny: "Oh, my! What… What are you doing??
Taking advantage of an innocent girl! How horrible!
Leave this house immediately, young man, before I call the police.
As for you, Miss Wendy: get to your room. We will speak about all this with your father."


8 - NANNY LEAVES THE HOUSE

Nanny: "All is well, young people?
I hope this girl gives you satisfaction, professor.
I am certain that you can help her to progress quickly...
I have to go away for a bit to pick up some things at the village.
Of course, you can continue the lesson. I entrust her to you, professor. Apply yourself well, Miss Wendy."


9 - WENDY AND THE TEACHER ARE ALONE IN THE HOUSE...

Teacher: "Well, Miss Wendy! I think that you are a little pervert who hides many things from her nanny.
Your behavior is not like a good educated girl.
Do you think that a girl with your upbringing would greet her piano teacher without wearing panties?
You are really a bad girl. You would deserve a big punishment to teach you good manners.
Wendy: "The professor has to educate his pupil... even if he must punish her."


10 - NANNY IS BACK

Nanny: "Here I am, Miss Wendy. I am back. I trust that everything went well?
I met with your piano teacher in the alley. He complimented you and said that you were very gifted."

Wendy: "Indeed, This piano lesson was very pleasant and I think I have learned much, thanks to him."

Nanny: "I am happy that your afternoon was pleasant. Frankly, what more would you have done at the village?"

Wendy: "Oh, nothing more, Nanny... Absolutely nothing more..."


LOSE THE GAME

Nanny is right: well educated girls must watch their behavior... or be more careful not to get caught. You lose this time.


WIN THE GAME

Great, young girls education has no secret for you... you win.
(??? I can’t figure out what you’re trying to say here.)

[shark]

Great work !
Thank you very much

significance of the last sentence:
congratulation,you win the game because you are a specialist for education of young girls (especially sex education,it's a joke)

[Cocker]

Why not imagine a other senario where we have Wendy, Nanny and the Teacher together ? And another one with Nanny and Wendy ? The first could be set between the point 7 and the 8. The last could be set between the point four and five. In the two cases, Wendy (and/or the Teacher) arrive to convince Nanny.

[shark]

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the goal of the game is to avoid being surprised by Nanny... if she takes part in the "lesson", there is no more chalenge...

[cruiser]

hello sharky! nice to hear you have a new game.I will test to translate it in german.Will post when im finished.I follow lemoncurry text and numbers.
greatings

[lemoncurry]

sharky, I would change the "win" statement to be: "You are certainly skilled at "educating" young ladies. You win!"

[Mike]

Bonjour Shark,

J'ai déjà commencé la traduction en allemand, elle sera prête sous peu, tu aura deux versions.
A +

[shark]

lemoncurry wrote : "win" statement to be: "You are certainly skilled at "educating" young ladies. You win!"

that's the good signification
thanks...

[shark]

thanks to lemoncurry for the English version and cruiser for the German version.
you were very fast !!!
I send the game to both as soon as I programmed the texts...

[Mike]

Sorry, I'm not fast enough. I apologize, I have a lot of work with my factory.
Sorry.

[styrian]

that sounds great! when is the new game available?

[cruiser]

he sharky!
congrats to your new game.its funny.the only i think ,the sound is lilbit to loud.but awsome work and good graphics.
GO FORWARD!!!!