Business Trip Adventure 2

[gooding]

Hi guys! You already know the Business Trip Adventure game. Now the continuation of this series is waiting for you.

Business Trip Adventure 2



Play link: http://sexhotgames.com/business-trip-adventure-2/

[Empyrean]

English in this game is terrible.

[Aman1110]

the
english was very bad in this one and no real challenge just point click

[Trucla]

Aman1110 wrote : the grammer and english was very bad in this one and no real challenge just point click

I agree that English is not particularly good. But then it's not out of the usual standards in the games from the same source.

But criticizing the English written using a gross mistake like "grammer", is - in my opinion - unforgivable! First learn, then teach!

Cheers!

[Salamandastron]

1. Like everyone else mentioned, the English is pretty bizarre. Sometimes, I wasn't really sure what the choices/responses were supposed to mean. Simple solution - next time, before compiling the game, just send the text to a native English speaker and get them to edit it for you. I'm sure there are even some guys on this forum who'd help you out.

2. In the 2nd scenario (the bar), you end up doing a lot of talking and correct choice selection, and then end up paying for the girl. That's somewhat a turn off - if the player is going to put in all that effort, might as well make him seduce a regular girl at the bar.

3. Continuity. In the plane, the stewardess tells you to meet her in the bathroom, and the next scene has them on a bed. What kind of luxury airline is this?

[gooding]

Thank you for your replies, soon we will post a new game, and as soon as it will be ready we'll ask for help edititg texts.

[upm]

Is it possible to get anywhere with the Boss lady? She either tells me to get back to work or says my mouth smells like a skunk...

Edit I found the comment about grabbing the microscopic pack of gum off of the desk. You should make it more visible in the game-perhaps when the alarm rings show the desktop .

[cecile1]

Wanna try this business trip adventure.


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[robertz]

[quote="cecile1"]Wanna try this business trip adventure.


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Have you tried already?

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[Slipstone]

Wow - this guy's language becomes more and more eccentric. I 'completed' the 'game' and was informed that I had made it with 3/3 girls. Odd - I only remembered two...........the boss and the stewardess. I don't feel that I want to use up my life going back through it though.