by Tjommi » Fri, 09Mar20 02:15
You have made a cute little game here. I would like to say that I am not a programmer, I am just a game lover, that have played ALOT of games in all genre as I got my first computer back in 1984. I've pretty much tried it all, and I love innovative flash games. What I write is ment as critisism... good and bad, it's not written to put you down. Positive things about it, is that the models were cute, no bugs and you have taken the time to create a scenario. The layout is easy to use and the art is very pretty. The scrïpt might be cheezy as commented earlier, but hehe I know how hard it actually is to write a scrïpt with sexy dialogue, and I think you did good.
When it comes to the negative, I gotta go back to my opening line. A cute little game. I finished the game in about 5 minutes, if I spent that long on it. The game is to simular to the meet and fuck games that gamesofdesire produce for their website, and comparing your game to theirs your game fall short. If you haven't allready I recommend that you try a couple of em out and you'll see what I am talking about.
If you got anything to do with the Erotic sim dating game that you got on the lesssons of passion site, that again is a classic. It's in my opinion the best dating game of that genre ever made. Compared to this game that I plowed through in a couple of minutes I have spent hours on that other simdate. This is something that you guys really know, and I would recommend that you rather picked up that genre again and made something new and revolutioning like you did when you released that game. What you guys did right there, was that you created interventions very interesting interventions that took you away from the main story that added dept to the game, and made you feel like you had several choices and made your game stand out over the competition. With this game sadly you don't quite reach up there.