Illustrated Love Stories

[ILSWriter]

You guys aren't going to believe this, especially LRM. Just now was the first time I looked at my PMs. I didn't even know they were there. I apologize for not answering them.

BTW, Freddie is the boy's coach who is trying to get into Emily's panties. He has just run into a major problem.

ILSWriter

[LRM]

I reserve the right to retract my kiss offer. I think you may be an evil woman. I have no problem kissing body parts of evil women!
L
That is in part why I pushed so hard for your e-mail account. I forgive your lack of reply. If you try to respond and cannot I deleted my thread(s). One more AceBoard glitch.
L
I have a very good memory, If you send me an answer it will likely trigger a memory of the original IM.

[LRM]

I fear your story line may dredge up thoughts of SE Asia. The most beautiful women I saw there had body parts women do not possess. They had an annual beauty contest and were quite taking. More than one GI was unpleasantly surprised when her(?) panties were removed. I was thankfully spared that unpleasant experience.
L

[LRM]

How will the parents of the girls gymnastic team react when they learn the coach with easy access to the locker room is a male?
L
I would not be happy if my daughter is on the team.

[ILSWriter]

the coach with easy access to the locker room is a male

I missed this somewhere. How did you determine coach Emily is a male?

[Graen]

ILSWriter wrote :

the coach with easy access to the locker room is a male

I missed this somewhere. How did you determine coach Emily is a male?

Right Here

ILSWriter wrote : But Freddie, that's what I have been trying to tell you. I am not a woman.

I believe that's where the confusion began...

[Greebo]

Isn't there an alternative explanation? It is possible to consider that, rather than her being a man, Emily is not a woman yet - because she is still a virgin!

I dare say ILSWriter will enlighten us soon, whatever the explanation is.

[LRM]

Is that a virgin woman?
L
With VERY few exceptions you are either male or female. Jamie Lee Curtis is a little of both as are a few others but they are extremely rare.
I take the same view as the International Olympic Committee.

[Greebo]

LRM wrote : Is that a virgin woman?
L

I'm talking technicalities here - see under 'Woman' in Wikipedia: "in certain cultures which link family honor with female virginity, the word girl is still used to refer to a never-married woman; in this sense it is used in a fashion roughly analogous to the obsolete English maid or maiden. Referring to an unmarried female as a woman may, in such a culture, imply that she is sexually experienced, which would be an insult to her family."

(Of course in this day and age when virgins tend to be rarer than hen's teeth, one would seldom be able to refer to any post puberty female human as a 'girl' let alone 'maiden'!)

[okimaon1]

Hi ILSwriter, I guess it's been said here before - I love your art, I think your animation (masturbation, etc) are very arousing.

however - your characters are very flat. I dont know anything about them, except what is being directly said by them.
This leaves me assuming that you are foucsing getting to the results, the sex scenes, rather than the story leading to them.

since you are obviously gifted, I'd like to recommend that you team up with someone who's interested in writing scrïpts. Collaborations like these have brought us Keely and Christine.

Good Luck

OKI

[Greebo]

Greebo wrote : I dare say ILSWriter will enlighten us soon, whatever the explanation is.

Mwahaha! I am inwincible!

[Arnulf]

You are right, greebo, but the main question is: nobody will die as virgin, therefore we could be curious, when it would happen!

[Greebo]

Arnulf wrote : ...nobody will die as virgin...

Some will, but I don't think she's going to last much longer!

[ILSWriter]

This is Ashley, one of Emily's students. What do you suppose she is trying to decide?

[ILSWriter]

Okimaon1 I thank you for your comments.

however - your characters are very flat. I dont know anything about them, except what is being directly said by them.
This leaves me assuming that you are foucsing getting to the results, the sex scenes, rather than the story leading to them.

Your assumption is spot on.

since you are obviously gifted,

I thank you but keep your day job. You won't make it as a literary critic.

I'd like to recommend that you team up with someone who's interested in writing scrïpts.

No way!

Collaborations like these have brought us Keely and Christine.

Who is Keely and Christine?
I have started a poll on my site that you may be interested in. I'll let it run for a week and see what comes up.