Pandora part I

[Frank]

Additionally, I hope that your statement that this was the first half of your game was off by a bit, Maybe this was the first 10% or so. You have tons of room for plot development. Take the time you need to fully develop it, so when your full version comes out, people don't think the game was too short.

Hello Frank and thanks for your words.
What I did already said is this. Pandora part I and Pandora part II are Kean's POV and story on how he discovers...some things.
There is plenty of room for other Pandora games, with diferent POVs and story developments.

I mainly meant that I hoped there were more than a week remaining in elapsed time in the game to go, since part one appeared to take place in less than a week's elapsed time. A week or two seems extremely short for a serious exploration mission, especially one l with such a remote possibility of finding its target right off the bat. Please consider lengthening the game to develop the main plot further. You have a setting with great potential. Nurture that potential.

[Greyelf]

I'm not familiar with the term "Dipsy"

Either meaning of the slang word Dipsy could be relevant in that scene.

[Frank]

I'm not familiar with the term "Dipsy"

Either meaning of the slang word Dipsy could be relevant in that scene.

Ok. I hadn't even known about it. I guess since it is slang from the 1950's that is no longer in wide use, that explains why I'm not familiar with it.

[Cochise]

Very nice, the quality is evident. The only gripe that comes to mind is the linearity, but hey, can't have everything.

As for scenes

Apparently the trigger for the Maggie scene at the end is (not counting conversation choices, which I'm too lazy to track) refusing to do anything with Roos in the hot tub. If so, what is Rita's? I thought I was making good progress but after she cries she just leaves. Can you only progress with Rita if you don't make advances on any of the other girls?

Anyway, looking forward to part 2.

[Skelaturi]

now here is whats more challenging imo aswell. We humans are doomed by famine, aging, war, sickness. but hope was still trapped in the box. Does that mean we got no hope?

That's the question Roos raises.

well us dutchies are very great at raising questions. But for yours truly answering them doesn't go to well =P.

[Wader]

Very nice, the quality is evident. The only gripe that comes to mind is the linearity, but hey, can't have everything.

As for scenes

Apparently the trigger for the Maggie scene at the end is (not counting conversation choices, which I'm too lazy to track) refusing to do anything with Roos in the hot tub. If so, what is Rita's? I thought I was making good progress but after she cries she just leaves. Can you only progress with Rita if you don't make advances on any of the other girls?

Anyway, looking forward to part 2.

for Maggie i think is anything but sex, you can receive the hand/blowjob that you will still have the maggie scene, Rita i think is just a hand on the face showing affection, nothing sexual with her in the part 1

[tlaero]

I hope the next game in co-laboration with Tlaero, will be available as download again.

Yes, it will be.

I absolutely support everything Mortze is doing, but our joint games will continue to be free downloads.

Tlaero

[Greyelf]

.... I guess since it is slang from the 1950's that is no longer in wide use, that explains why I'm not familiar with it.

That would depend on which country you live in and possibly what social level in said country you associate with, because I know people that use that word in RL which is why I knew what it meant. lol

editedL to add missing I

[rdemon]

First of all this game is awesome:

+ Great graphics
+ Unique plot (unlike 90% of other games in this genre)
+ Diversity in ages and types of characters
+ Erotic tension between the characters
+ I love voyeurism

It has just some tiny flaws:
- Choices seem not to matter that much
- Linearity/ A little more freedom to explore the ship (Even so you told everyone this game will be linear, I have the feeling just a tiny bit of freedom would make a huge difference.)

Thank you so much for your work! This game doesn't feel like to be your first game at all. I hope you continue! Developers like you really make me enjoy some of my free time.

[Darius]

I really enjoyed playing your game, Mortze.

I took it as an introduction to the Pandora universe so I wasn't bored by the linearity. Having said that, I expect more complexity/interactions for the next episodes ^^

What I found great is that there is a life on the boat and Kean is just a part of this life. I appreciated to see characaters interacting between them. It helps to build a strong story (according to me).

The scene with the doctor remembered me my first Hentai's game where you always has some mentors to help you become an adult... and I liked it (especially your - funny - way).

I also loved the god's part (and as a Stargate's fan, the use of the Stargate's version of Atlantis ^^).

Top girls for me: Rita and Kaori.

[Mortze]

I took it as an introduction to the Pandora universe so I wasn't bored by the linearity. Having said that, I expect more complexity/interactions for the next episodes ^^

What I found great is that there is a life on the boat and Kean is just a part of this life. I appreciated to see characaters interacting between them. It helps to build a strong story (according to me).

Exactly my intentions.

I also loved the god's part (and as a Stargate's fan, the use of the Stargate's version of Atlantis ^^).

you got me there!

[Mortze]

So, many of you asked "how about a downloadable version of Pandora?"
I can't make up my mind on how that should proceed, so I'm here to ask your opinion. I created a poll on my site (http://www.mortzeart.com/?p=164) where you can express your opinion.
I'll try to decide on this in the next week.

[NickNKVD]

So, many of you asked "how about a downloadable version of Pandora?"
I can't make up my mind on how that should proceed, so I'm here to ask your opinion. I created a poll on my site (http://www.mortzeart.com/?p=164) where you can express your opinion.
I'll try to decide on this in the next week.

I don't think this is correct for those who already donated, knowing that they would have had as a bonus the downloadable version. (I am not among them).

[Mortze]

I don't think this is correct for those who already donated, knowing that they would have had as a bonus the downloadable version. (I am not among them).

As for now, nobody yet donated for Pandora so that isn't relevant.

And please, do comment on this subject on my site. It isn't elegant or polite to talk about these things on Shark's forum.

[NickNKVD]

Sorry, I will never do it again.