Aaron's life

[Super]

No ones got any feedback for him? Seems like coffee is taking all the attention at the moment, haha

Anyway, pretty good. Only real complaint is that, for the threesome end, there should have been some scenes between lily and Mia to lead up to that... But yeah, all in all it's good. Hope you'll make a new game!

[Rikwar]

Thanks Dakutis I just downloaded the full game and looking forward to playing it later tonight, , judging by the number of files seems like you put a lot of time into the game, looks promising seeing I enjoyed the demo

[Franco]

This is a good first effort. It looks like the author/creator might not be a native speaker of English. If you do more games in English, it might be a good idea to have the text reviewed by a native English speaker before posting. Gee, I wonder where those fine graphics came from.

[jfrancois323]

WOW !!! This version is truly better than the preceding one !! The story is so great !!

Tlaro made a great job with his Adventure creator !!

So Dakutis Great job !!!

[ExLibris]

I enjoyed this game a lot more than I thought I would. It's true that the writing could be a lot better, but once I got past that I found that the plot had enough twists and turns to keep me interested.

A couple of minor comments:
It seems a bit odd that acceding to the PC's boss's blackmail should cause a relationship hit with both Mia and Lily. How do they know what's happened?
It also feels as though there should have been some more scenes with Mia. As it is, you interact with Lily about twice as much as Mia so the threesome ending feels like it comes out of the blue almost.

[Dakutis]

I enjoyed this game a lot more than I thought I would. It's true that the writing could be a lot better, but once I got past that I found that the plot had enough twists and turns to keep me interested.

A couple of minor comments:
It seems a bit odd that acceding to the PC's boss's blackmail should cause a relationship hit with both Mia and Lily. How do they know what's happened?
It also feels as though there should have been some more scenes with Mia. As it is, you interact with Lily about twice as much as Mia so the threesome ending feels like it comes out of the blue almost.

Hi Exlibris, you are my best reviewer, I was waiting for your comments. I tried to correct all the places, about which you wrote earlier. About blackmail, yes youare right they don't know what happen, but I thought that it should punish PC a little for that action, it is like bad thing that you don't have to do.
And what about Mia - this is long story, and I want to tell it in next my game.
It was hard to answer all questions in this game so I have idea to create spin-off where you get all answers and event know what happened later.
But I'm not sure if anyone needs it.

[pH Cockatrice]

I just played this. Managed to get all five endings. I think it's well done overall. It's pretty good as it is, though I thought Mia's entrance in the "best" ending kind of popped up abruptly. I wouldn't mind seeing this game revisited and expanded a little with more choices and variations.

Good job.

[jfrancois323]

I keep finding only three ending :

Life with Mia
Life with Lily
Lily droping me

What are the last two ???

Thank in advance !!

[ltpika]

I keep finding only three ending :

Life with Mia
Life with Lily
Lily droping me

What are the last two ???

Thank in advance !!

threesome and mmf with shower girl

[Dakutis]

I keep finding only three ending :

What are the last two ???

Thank in advance !!

What? The game is not so easy?

In demo was bonus scene with Suki. I reconstructed this scene to 3 scenes. Anybody find it?

[mattynice]

i did

[jfrancois323]

I didn't, but now i got 3 scenes to find

[Greebo]

This is a good first effort. It looks like the author/creator might not be a native speaker of English. If you do more games in English, it might be a good idea to have the text reviewed by a native English speaker before posting. Gee, I wonder where those fine graphics came from.

Humph, I did review it, although I haven't looked at the latest upload. After my first set of corrections I sent in a second set, picking up on what I missed the first time round -- there shouldn't be many left to find!

[Super]

Seems like Coffee stole most of your thunder =C Shame, I hope it doesn't stop you from making another game though.

Were you thinking of asking leonizer about adding it to playforceone?

[noskcaj]

The game is great. I enjoy it a lot.

The best of the game are:

1. Great animations!!
2. Many branches with differents girls
3. Long ad well done sex scenes


Things to improve

1. I think the game is too easy (maybe more bad options with Mia part)
2. Mia should have more interaction parts (She is living at your house!!!)
3. I agree that the threesome part happens suddenly. Maybe an iteraction with Mia and Lily previous sex scenes in the house could guide the stoy to a threesome