SquallLion wrote : sound are needed too!
At least when you turn the computer on, some music should play and either loop, or fade out.
The same goes with looking at Julia's picture on the cellphone; The player should see a picture. And a single guy living on his own has two beds? And why does he need to take a bath in one room and brush his teeth in another? It's the little things like these that need some attention.
I know English isn't your first language, but it's "Hello" not "Hallo"
When explaining the drawings to Julia, the dialogue box isn't large enough to display all the text.
Buttons and indicators would be nice, especially for the dialogue scene with Julia so the player can know how to end the conversation, and the sex scenes so the player knows where to move their cursor.
BTW, I may not know much about woman... but when they take their shirts off and expose their breasts, and then ask you to come to bed... I don't think they're interested in you stroking their arm...
With regards to gameplay... it's really just more of the same. I think that Jordan500 even with all it's faults was a much better game than this.
As to the story... well, I guess I'll have to wait and see what the next episode brings.
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You do good work Leon, and I do look forward to your next adventure, I was just hoping for more of an evolution with this game compared to your previous works.
On a side note: I've not been able to get the playforceone.com login to work in a long time.