"Milly" by rkshooter

[rkshooter]

Milly is right... I took a job a few weeks ago.....I have been working on more story and it should be ready soon....There is no time frame for releases.....I send them when I finish one....I am working 2 episodes at a time because it helps me know direction of the story.....But here is teaser......Milly....cuts her hair....she thought it was too hot in the sun.....She sure looks good all ..........HA HA HA

[accipiters]

Awesome...Simply Awesome rkshooter...... Impressive work there....

Do u have other stories (completed) like 'Milly'? or is it your first attempt? if u have any other stories please post them too....

And what about the new parts of Milly? when should we expect them?

by the by how about turning this story into a 3d motion picture?

[tr_rooster]

great job rk! I check everyday just to see if a new part has come out yet. You get 2 thumbs up from me.

[SimpleSimon]

very nice; good touch with the dildo

[Dyonisis]

Very nice very nice
very good details
Can't wait until Ben makes his move!!

[lemoncurry]

rk, well done. I have to admit that I prefer the stories that involve more than one person to the solo stories. With two people, tension is created and that is more exciting. The susan and ben chapter was a great example of that. I was disappointed when there wasn't anything more with the bell boy.

with that said, well done and thanks for all the good stuff!

[rkshooter]

Lemoncurry.....its cumming.......sort of.....If that is the case you will love the up comming episodes.....

[hammerhead]

But make sure Ben is enjoying Milly's pals. Milly must stay frustrated please.

Now....... when is Pusooy going to finish Island Girl?

[cruiser]

great stuff

[Sharkoid]

[font=Arial]Perhaps the guy who was the delivery man for the flowers who also peeped at Milly when she was reading the card sent from Susan, he could be included in the whole story?

And maybe a surprise from Ben, who arrives in Jamacia, and starts having fun with her at Jamacia.

Ben shows up at Milly's hotel room, and he just came over to say hi. He plans to stay as long as Milly is staying. Milly invites him in and he talks to Milly about where he could stay in Jamacia. Milly suggests staying with her. And Ben rejects her invitation, but after awhile, with Milly's encouragement, Ben decides to stay with her. On the last day of their trip, Ben catches Milly playing with herself in the toilet. He watches her play with herself. But after a few minutes, he couldnt take it anymore and pretends to "accidentally" walk in on Milly playing with herself. Embarrassed, Milly apologises. But Ben said it was ok, and Milly leaves the toilet naked. Ben takes a shower and Milly(still naked) peeps at him. As Ben comes out of the shower, Milly hurries to get out, but falls. The naked Ben picks Milly up and they both laugh. After that, Milly goes to bed. But, suddenly, there is a black-out. Milly is frightened, and Ben comes to ask about the blackout and comforts Milly as well. Ben climbs into bed with Milly as a comfort and he falls asleep there. Excited, Milly starts playing with herself and Ben wakes up and watches her playing with herself. He reaches his hand over to her wet pussy and plays with her and they both have sex afterwards. [/font]

[Sharkoid]

oh yes, by the way, rk, love your works

[luke]

Wow !!! What a hot episode
As we say in french : "Ben ne perd rien pour attendre" (literal translation : "Ben does not lose anything to wait", but i don't know if it's the right expression)
That promises a great firework when Milly and Ben finally have sex together... Damn lucky Ben !
Keep on the good work, rkshooter

[accipiters]

The new part is nice but not as good as the previous 11 parts.

keeping fingers crossed for the upcoming parts

[shark]

Hey boys,
The new part (13) is very hot !!!

[Djodjo]

WOOOOOOOOOW The new part is very hot and exciting !

Milly is a naughty girl in fact...

Good work RKShooter, as usual ;-)