"Milly" by rkshooter

[ctunnel]

okay I spent the last couple of days reading Milly, and at first, it was a little bland but the sex got hotter and hotter, then when Mr. Johnson's motives were revealed I was repulsed, but the last four episodes have me hooked again. The sex is extremely hot, and theres an element creeping in that has me expecting at least Milly to come out all right. I would like for this experience to take Ben and Millie to a different place in their relationship where they can be in love and fuck other people.

[Greebo]

Maybe Jet Pack Jenny should rescue them, ctunnel, eh?

[ctunnel]

Greebo wrote : Maybe Jet Pack Jenny should rescue them, ctunnel, eh?

holy Geez, that's about the fastest I've ever been 'outed.' I guess hosting my avatar on my website was a bad idea for anonymity, huh?

[Shule87]

Hey Rkshooter when the new episode come in???

[LRM]

@ RK;
I know your hand is still problematic. I gave him the bird on your behalf.
L

[Italian87]

When the new episode come in????

[LRM]

When the new episode come in????

Please see the post immediately above.
L

[shark]

You miss Milly ? …. Me too...
While waiting, take a look in the contrib' section. Some pretty (new) pics of the beauty...

[David]

You miss Milly ? …. Me too...
While waiting, take a look in the contrib' section. Some pretty (new) pics of the beauty...

Milly!!

Looking great!!!!!

[ctunnel]

I really liked that little Milly story. Very hot. I love rkshooter's work so much.

[Greebo]

An excellent Milly story, RKS! A little clichéd - woman gets pulled up by traffic cop and offers payment in kind for forgetting to ticket her - but brilliantly executed! Not quite what I'd expect of Milly unless it's a fantasy, part of an escape bid or Robert's completely turned her into a slut, but I think I can forgive you the quirky storyline in the light of the finished item.

By the way, I hope this means you are healing well and are able to devote some time to some more Milly episodes - don't forget to contact me if you could use my assistance again, I'm only too pleased to help.

Greebo

[rkshooter]

While I used Milly for the short story it is not any part of the series, I just like her so I used her in the story, I should have probably use a different character.

Thanks
RKShooter

[Greebo]

I thought that might be the case - she really is a delightful creation!

[ctunnel]

While I used Milly for the short story it is not any part of the series, I just like her so I used her in the story, I should have probably use a different character.

Thanks
RKShooter

Depending on the way Milly's current storyline ends, it could be worked in after the entire sordid affair with Robert is over. Always an interesting writer's challenge to take unconnected stories with similar characters and work them into a shared universe, like people have done with John Munch.

Love your work, rkshooter.

[Bonhomie]

While I used Milly for the short story it is not any part of the series, I just like her so I used her in the story, I should have probably use a different character.

Thanks
RKShooter

Would have been ideal for her sister Susan.
You know I like Susan - I have asked to see more of her in the past.

In fact I am already looking forward to her coming to rescue Ben, and then be 'riding shotgun' when Ben goes to free MIlly, and of course they will 'save' Janice too, and then have a final end of story fantastic foursome.

Damn - sorry RK didn't mean to give the plot away