"Milly" by rkshooter

[cheese101]

wait,I found the problem,i went to www.sharkslagoon.fr
instead of
www.sharks-lagoon.fr

both work,but only the 2nd one has milly 35 :P

[Greebo]

The plot thickens - now why would Robert want an invention that can be used to put images in peoples minds do you think?

Is the "dream" sequence near the end supposed to be wordless, RKS?

[rkshooter]

Greebo, Ok yes it was intentional but i'm not sure it will stay that way. Would You like to put in the text?

[xeris89]

Thanks RKS!

[Bonhomie]

Nice developments

Your proof readers let you down RKS

There's a 'few' that should be 'view' first image when the girls are in the hotel room. - Milly's talking I think.

Plus the word 'intrepid' seems to have replaced "interpret" in several places.

However brilliant as always - the dream had to be a dream - Milly cannot succumb that easily

[Greebo]

rkshooter wrote : Greebo, Ok yes it was intentional but i'm not sure it will stay that way. Would You like to put in the text?

I'd be willing to have a try and see what you think - I'll email you. I think I've got your email address from a PM just over a year ago.

[Greebo]

Bonhomie wrote : Nice developments

Your proof readers let you down RKS

There's a 'few' that should be 'view' first image when the girls are in the hotel room. - Milly's talking I think.

Plus the word 'intrepid' seems to have replaced "interpret" in several places.

However brilliant as always - the dream had to be a dream - Milly cannot succumb that easily

My question is: if it's a dream or hallucination, who does it belong to - Milly or Marcus - and how did it come about? I'm sure RKS has the answer.

I noticed the 'few' and 'intrepid' among the minor mistakes, and if I do get involved after talking to RKS, I'll see if I can help with things like that - I quite often Beta my wife's fics!

[rkshooter]

And there are others as well you can email me at rkshootertalk@cox.net

[Greebo]

I have emailed you, that was the address I had - let me know if it doesn't appear within a sensible time, please.

[spitzertyp]

aaah, Milly is back, great!!!
I absolutely like the maid-outfit. Maybe the new episode is the one with the most text???? And for some reason i cannot define exactly this one seems a little --- hmmm... confused? at least to me by first look, but i'm hopeful to follow the story by second and third looks ;-)
Like always: thank u rks and keep on the excellent work!

another question which i had for longer time: is this the only project u r working on (for sure enuff work to do it beneathways, don't misunderstand me) or do u have other stories in mind??

[Raelee]

Great work as usual rkshooter.

[rkshooter]

Did Not get email please try again Greebo

[Greebo]

I hope you don't have problems receiving from yahoo.com addresses, RKS - I'll try again.

Right, I've resent it - title 'Milly dialogue and Beta-ing'

I've just sent it from my gmail.com account as well

[Greebo]

@rkshooter
I've just PMed you and attempted emailing to the other address your PM mentioned

[JIMMYJOHN]

@RKS
Very nice as always, and a source of inspiration for me.
I have a few questions about the programs you use, where you get the stuff (clothes, decors...) and copyright (why and how).
Please let me know if you don't mind me asking.