SENTENZA1138 wrote:
Don't be like that. You must be proud of what you've done. Personally I think it's going to be awesome and I can't wait to play it.
Oh you're right, I'm proud, but still nervous. I was proud of "Get me Pregnant" too. I was proud of "Stripper Pick Up". Me thinking it's great does not mean the players will think it's great, so I'm nervous.
I received some feedback recently from someone I have huge respect for, and it was not ALL positive. So that makes me nervous too. He said he thinks the fans will love it, but pointed out many deficiencies that I recognize as well, once he pointed them out.
One of the weaknesses, I think, is that I conceived of the game as a continuation of the first LWT. So I really just wrote a bunch of hot scenes with the characters, as though it were just playing 10 more days of the first game, with all the women dying to fuck Justin in whatever way he wanted. In that context, the scenes are super hot. But the weakness is that the game does not stand on its own as well as the first. The game relies on the first game for some of the character development and tension. That should be fine if you know the first game well, but if someone plays the sequel BEFORE they play the first game, it could seem disjointed. And for some, it's not as COMPLETE as the first game because it actually relies on the first game for so much of the plot. Yes, there is a new plot and game mechanic, but the game was not built from the ground up around them. It was built from LWT 1, and the the new plot and game mechanic was built on top of that. I think it works pretty well, but, well, as is often the case, if I could start all over again, I would have done it differently. (Don't despair, i wanted to start LWT 1 all over again too, and still do).
One of the play testers pointed out that it has a meaner/nastier tone than the first. I did not intend for that, but looking t it now, I see that he's right. I think it's a natural consequence of trying to give something new to a game - to push the story further - but I realize it makes the sequel different from the first in a way that the die hard romantics may not like.
I'm rambling. The point is, that though I'm proud, and I think I've written some scenes that will blow SOME people's minds, I'm also nervous because I may have written a game that the a lot of die-hard fans find a perversion of the original. Kind of like George Lucas saying Han Solo did not shoot first. (But not nearly THAT bad).
Anyway, just please play it and be constructive in your criticism. I already see ways to correct some of the short comings in the expansion - if it get's enough of a positive response. It seems like I'm trying to influence the response here, but it's just a fact: If everyone seems to hate it, then we won't bother with an expansion, so please be measured in your criticism.
Iks