Thanks all. I had the girl leaning a bit more on the bike with both of her hands which gave it some weight and looked a bit more balanced. However, there was an issue with a ruffled part of her upper sleeve that needed to be dealt with. Hence the fingertips of her left hand on the bike. This little move added that "movement into position" Mortze commented on. I settled for that movement pose instead of wrestling with getting her back to leaning with both hands because the movement and therefore lack of balance created a tension which creates interest (as long as it is realistic). This movement/tension also helps the eye move towards the guy (who I tried to make it look as though he was looking at her arse).
The light on her that has been referred to is a spot. I also turn off the headlamps of cameras. This seems to be a fairly common practice from what I have read. As soon as the light on her was mentioned I realized that I had forgotten to change the color of it to match the color of the time of day.
There is also a graininess to the render that I don't care for. Earlier on in my learning process I had come across something that was supposed to fix this. But for the life of me I haven't been able to track down the link that referred to it.
If I were to use this in a story I would correct the things mentioned above and I was thinking of losing her sunglasses as they block her eyes enough to keep us from seeing that she is looking at him. Or perhaps pull them down her nose a bit.
Thank you all for the feedback. This was a good exercise/experience for me. I hope you all enjoyed the images.
Cheers,
Eldormain
P: Oh and her boobs look bigger then I think they are or are supposed to be. One of the adjustment tools might alter size, too. I will have to keep an eye on this. An easy enough task I think you would all agree.