Re: CIL: Art with Carla v1.2 (ES - EN)
Posted: Sun, 16May08 00:00
The game is quite good than most of visual novels I have seen , but there are few things that bother me. I think the game rushes, the flow isn't that smooth, some contents don't make any sense or doesn't usually happens in real world, the game doesn't have a good end. I am not sure how many endings are there, I just found 2. the phone scenes are quite good, so realistic when you wait until she finishes typing the messages. what I said by being rush, everything happens so quickly. there isn't side stories, random incidents. everything revolves around that girl. you go a to z of the story without any attachment to the character, the characters ain't memorable.
if you couldn't get the phone number of the teacher you fail the game. how come she refuses to give it to? like you are some kind of a stranger? usually tutors are supposed to give their number to the person that they teach, in case if something happened, or if they couldn't be in home so they can call the tutor and let them know the situation so the tutor won't waste their time on road. the erotic contents don't make any sense, she has been flirting from the beginning and then suddenly says she isn't into sex. she was even on undies ,kissed him, it is full of passion. she trusts him, she is comfortable around him. usually things like that end up in sex. she saw his willy. she was impressed. so it doesn't make any sense that she simply leaves. I think the ending should be like this, she came to your home, the story flows like how it's in the game, then when she saw your willy, she gets turned on, starts kissing and then it leads for sex, then both sleep with each other, in the next day she goes her home and celebrates the birthday, the guy feels so sad that he can't hangout with her, she doesn't call and all, but he does the exam the pass or fail. either way suddenly the girl came back from her town, she is like she wanted to forget the the guy,but she couldn't she missed him all the time, so she decided to come back to him, then both hug each other, and starts dating, then it shows their new love story a bit at end. like they go to random places and do romantic stuff. sometimes they do sex too. if it went like that it would be so awesome. the next part can be something like, he goes to college, she finds another job, but both live together in a new home,, then it shows the problems in their relationship, and how they overcome them. it either ends up with marriage or breakup depends on how the user does the game. well that's my opinion. anyway I would rate the story 5/10 , graphics 7/10 , gui 8/10 , functionality of the game 4/10 (saving is so bad ,can't load a particular save), overall game 6/10.
if you couldn't get the phone number of the teacher you fail the game. how come she refuses to give it to? like you are some kind of a stranger? usually tutors are supposed to give their number to the person that they teach, in case if something happened, or if they couldn't be in home so they can call the tutor and let them know the situation so the tutor won't waste their time on road. the erotic contents don't make any sense, she has been flirting from the beginning and then suddenly says she isn't into sex. she was even on undies ,kissed him, it is full of passion. she trusts him, she is comfortable around him. usually things like that end up in sex. she saw his willy. she was impressed. so it doesn't make any sense that she simply leaves. I think the ending should be like this, she came to your home, the story flows like how it's in the game, then when she saw your willy, she gets turned on, starts kissing and then it leads for sex, then both sleep with each other, in the next day she goes her home and celebrates the birthday, the guy feels so sad that he can't hangout with her, she doesn't call and all, but he does the exam the pass or fail. either way suddenly the girl came back from her town, she is like she wanted to forget the the guy,but she couldn't she missed him all the time, so she decided to come back to him, then both hug each other, and starts dating, then it shows their new love story a bit at end. like they go to random places and do romantic stuff. sometimes they do sex too. if it went like that it would be so awesome. the next part can be something like, he goes to college, she finds another job, but both live together in a new home,, then it shows the problems in their relationship, and how they overcome them. it either ends up with marriage or breakup depends on how the user does the game. well that's my opinion. anyway I would rate the story 5/10 , graphics 7/10 , gui 8/10 , functionality of the game 4/10 (saving is so bad ,can't load a particular save), overall game 6/10.