chrispool wrote:Thank you for the game. It's more an interactive story than a game. I had a lot of fun playing it. It's very well written and the scenes described are funny and exciting. The progressive fall of the priestess into lust is well explained. A good job you've done.
Some little things :
- the screen is too small, it's difficult to read the text sometimes
- too much grinding at the end of the story, it's boring
- larger pictures with the priestess wearing each outfit would have been much appreciated (but I understand if you're not an artist)
But I repeat, your writing is very good, and I enjoyed your story. I'm looking forward to see your next production.
Thanks!
I think that you're the first to complain that the font is too small. I had another complain that it's too big and involves too much scrolling. Hehe. I am planning to add a font size adjuster in my next game so that everyone can set it as they like.
I added an item in the shop to help with this late game grinding in version 1.1.
And I understand about the art. I would have loved to have a lot of CGs in there and a doll system for you guys to play with her outfit but real life got in the way.
LeopoldWilliamReynolds wrote:I liked this game a lot, the writing was excellent and the story, while predictable, was satisfying. If this also had pictures it would play much like Akabur's Princess Trainer, and while imagining Aliane in my head was fun, I think images would be the biggest improvement going forward.
Glad you enjoyed yourself!
artorawley wrote:Fun game. I'll echo the sentiments of others that your writing is excellent. You would have made for an excellent AIF creator in the past had you gone with making games in TADS or ADRIFT instead of Unity, but the form translated quite well to Unity regardless. I wish the player character wasn't so mean-spirited (evil?), but I enjoyed how for certain scenes you provided the player with a "nicer" option so that was a nice compromise. Really looking forward to your next game, and here's hoping you can employ the services of a full-time artist the next time around.
Thanks! I do enjoy my smut to be a little mean spirited but know that it's not for everyone. Glad you liked it anyway.
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