Decstarr wrote:I like the game so far. The story line is rather nice and not as "unrealistic" as you often find them in such games. One thing, though: I think you should increase the "date count" by at least 1 or 2. I mean, it is ok that she starts to like the player, but after all, a girl who made it to college being a virgin prolly won't throw her virginity to a guy who only went on like 1 date with her. So I'd suggest to add another date option AFTER you get the grade for the paper, would make it even more convincing (and a lot more fun!).
You're right, I could have extended that a bit. And I would have wanted to, but that would have been a lot more work and honestly I wanted to finish this game and move on. The wAnime path was originally an optional path that was kinda hard to get (you had to mention anime, then go there instead of the park or movies, but I changed it for this exact reason: to give one more date. Hence why Celina is wearing the same shirt in both parts of the project.
redle wrote:Good game. Even more so as a first attempt.
A couple bugs I stumbled across...
1. Choosing achievements on the intro1 screen, the reference is to 'achieve1' without the file extension. Some browsers are likely to add the extension and others not so much (those that don't will give a lovely, file not found error).
2. park4c doesn't reference an image in the html file (src=""), so there is just the brief text and choices. (I suppose this could be intentional, but I imagine it should have an image)
Suggestion:
People do often like achievements in any form, but I think they are better when one can see them before achieving them. They can be veiled references, but at least let players see how many there are, and preferably give some clue what they might be (so players have a sense of direction when trying to pursue them).
Thanks!
1. I looked it up in Adventure Creator, and the link is to "Achieve1.htm"? That looks right to me...
2. Oh shoot! I fixed it on the work files, Sy will upload it to the site when he has a chance, along with any other bugs we might have missed.
Yeah, that is better... I will say this, though: There are only four in this game.
youpala34 wrote:Great game, just finish the short scene.
Thanks! What exactly do you mean, "Finish the short scene"?
Michuncik wrote:Great game
I really enjoy to play it.
Keep your good work!!!
Thanks so much!
basino wrote:Good game. Is unlocking the full sex scene dependent on choices you've made throughout the whole game or just on what you do during the sex?
Thanks! It's solely on the sex scene. Or rather, when Celina starts kissing you.