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Emily: Sister Attraction

Postby palmer_aif » Fri, 13Jun14 20:07

EDIT: The full game is now available.

So this is the first version of my first game. Due to several bugs and problems with Adrift 5 I've had to cut some planned interactivity in this version in order to get it out within a reasonable time frame. My hopes are that these problems will be fixed soon, at which point I'll start working on version 2.

Emily: Sister Attraction is a dialogue driven and linear game, with dynamic content and plenty of pictures. The story revolves around the increasingly passionate relationship between the player character and his sister Emily, as well as their love for each other. The game employs two main variables which in turn control the story: Intimacy Level and Daringness. Intimacy Level reflects how close the Player is with Emily and directly influences conversations and story, while daringness is required to enable certain commands in the game. These variables can be raised or lowered by performing certain actions or solving puzzles.

Although I and my beta testers have tried hard to squash all bugs, some may yet remain. Please try to overlook bugs and spelling mistakes should you find any. Bug reports and feedback are very welcome and can be provided on my site. Hope you enjoy it!

Download the game here:
http://love-joint-games.com/emily/Emily ... v1.0.1.rar
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Re: Demo release: Emily - Sister attraction

Postby rabbie » Fri, 13Jun14 23:23

Played it and enjoyed it and took a few notes while playing.

The last line in the intro says "sheer her up" instead of cheer

I really like how the computer works, its nice to be able to check the news, email and check Emily's facebook pictures. That could be updated as you go along.
One tiny problem was not being able to use "Turn on PC" only "turn on computer" even though "pc" can be used elsewhere.

Emily is cute as hell :crazy: and i love how there is a different picture for each body part you look at - i feel you could also use that as a real world action taken by the player character, since you are presented a picture of Emily just from looking at her...looking at body parts could be seen as ogling and the character/s having varying reactions to that.

I think adding a lot more flavor subjects to the "ask about" system would help and give the player little nuggets of info about the characters while you are searching for the correct thing to ask or just experimenting with what you can ask.
On that subject also, Im not sure if this was intentional but italic was quite hard to noticefor me,if it was me i might drop the bolded text, make each character talk in a different color and bold the topics that are of use to the player.

I did get a little stuck when trying to convince Emily to do the contest... i was trying to play the porn off the memory stick, i thought i might of hit a bug but in hindsight it seems that was just another end of the demo.

A small bug, if you talk to Emily about sleeping after prompted, then turn out the light when she jumps in the shower and you try to turn the light back on she tells you she is trying to sleep.

All in all this game is really promising, its kind of like a game i was trying to make at one point but ultimately deleted after not being dedicated enough. I love the incest theme, i like the slower building of there relationship... She teases just enough to stay cute while not straying into the usual AIF sex object.

I really hope you keep going, after i got to the end point i was really wanting more :D
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Re: Demo release: Emily - Sister attraction

Postby palmer_aif » Fri, 13Jun14 23:47

rabbie wrote:Played it and enjoyed it and took a few notes while playing.

The last line in the intro says "sheer her up" instead of cheer

I really like how the computer works, its nice to be able to check the news, email and check Emily's facebook pictures. That could be updated as you go along.
One tiny problem was not being able to use "Turn on PC" only "turn on computer" even though "pc" can be used elsewhere.

Emily is cute as hell :crazy: and i love how there is a different picture for each body part you look at - i feel you could also use that as a real world action taken by the player character, since you are presented a picture of Emily just from looking at her...looking at body parts could be seen as ogling and the character/s having varying reactions to that.

I think adding a lot more flavor subjects to the "ask about" system would help and give the player little nuggets of info about the characters while you are searching for the correct thing to ask or just experimenting with what you can ask.
On that subject also, Im not sure if this was intentional but italic was quite hard to noticefor me,if it was me i might drop the bolded text, make each character talk in a different color and bold the topics that are of use to the player.

I did get a little stuck when trying to convince Emily to do the contest... i was trying to play the porn off the memory stick, i thought i might of hit a bug but in hindsight it seems that was just another end of the demo.

A small bug, if you talk to Emily about sleeping after prompted, then turn out the light when she jumps in the shower and you try to turn the light back on she tells you she is trying to sleep.

All in all this game is really promising, its kind of like a game i was trying to make at one point but ultimately deleted after not being dedicated enough. I love the incest theme, i like the slower building of there relationship... She teases just enough to stay cute while not straying into the usual AIF sex object.

I really hope you keep going, after i got to the end point i was really wanting more :D


Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I agree with you on everything you say. The italic font thing is sort of walking a fine line between hard and not to easy, but it could use some tuning. The idea is not to have the user guessing verbs every two minutes but instead focus on the conversations and the developing story between the characters, which is really what the game is about. Regarding conversations, there is a problem with the current build of Adrift making the runner skip certain dialogs, leading to a few confusing and continuity breaking moments. (For instance, if you "x pussy" while she's sleeping, you'll get an output of something like "I once again looked at Emily", the problem here being that this respons isn't supposed to be output until you examine her for the second time. I.e, the first output never shows :/). Fixing this is very time consuming currently and can only be done with seperate tasks.

As you might have noticed, she has a lot of different replies depending on what intimacy level you have with her. For instance, there's 3 long conversations if you ask her about sex. But in order to get to the third conversation tree, you have to have an intimacy level of 3. I'm curious, did you manage to figure out what to do to get her to that level? Was it easy/hard? And about the photo contest, the requirement here is that you have an intimacy level of 2, plus Emily has to sleep on the matter :P. I also agree with you on the conversations, there needs to be more. A lot of them doesn't even work currently. For instance, you can convince her to masturbate on the photo shoot, but when you show her the porn magazine nothing will really happen. It's stuff like this that needs to be fixed, and currently Adrift is making it a really time consuming process.

I have done the graphics for the shower voyeur scene, and all the graphics for Amy. I've also started doing the graphics for the actual photo shoot. It's pretty time consuming adding bodily fluids on each different body part lol. Again, thanks for the nice comments.
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Re: Demo release: Emily - Sister attraction

Postby rabbie » Sat, 13Jun15 00:05

palmer_aif wrote:
rabbie wrote:Played it and enjoyed it and took a few notes while playing.

The last line in the intro says "sheer her up" instead of cheer

I really like how the computer works, its nice to be able to check the news, email and check Emily's facebook pictures. That could be updated as you go along.
One tiny problem was not being able to use "Turn on PC" only "turn on computer" even though "pc" can be used elsewhere.

Emily is cute as hell :crazy: and i love how there is a different picture for each body part you look at - i feel you could also use that as a real world action taken by the player character, since you are presented a picture of Emily just from looking at her...looking at body parts could be seen as ogling and the character/s having varying reactions to that.

I think adding a lot more flavor subjects to the "ask about" system would help and give the player little nuggets of info about the characters while you are searching for the correct thing to ask or just experimenting with what you can ask.
On that subject also, Im not sure if this was intentional but italic was quite hard to noticefor me,if it was me i might drop the bolded text, make each character talk in a different color and bold the topics that are of use to the player.

I did get a little stuck when trying to convince Emily to do the contest... i was trying to play the porn off the memory stick, i thought i might of hit a bug but in hindsight it seems that was just another end of the demo.

A small bug, if you talk to Emily about sleeping after prompted, then turn out the light when she jumps in the shower and you try to turn the light back on she tells you she is trying to sleep.

All in all this game is really promising, its kind of like a game i was trying to make at one point but ultimately deleted after not being dedicated enough. I love the incest theme, i like the slower building of there relationship... She teases just enough to stay cute while not straying into the usual AIF sex object.

I really hope you keep going, after i got to the end point i was really wanting more :D


As you might have noticed, she has a lot of different replies depending on what intimacy level you have with her. For instance, there's 3 long conversations if you ask her about sex. But in order to get to the third conversation tree, you have to have an intimacy level of 3. I'm curious, did you manage to figure out what to do to get her to that level? Was it easy/hard? And about the photo contest, the requirement here is that you have an intimacy level of 2, plus Emily has to sleep on the matter :P.


I did let her sleep on the matter, it was probably the intimacy level that let me down there...that was my first run through. 2nd time i did get the 3 conversations about sex and got her to the point where you can cum on the bed without ending the game - I'm not sure what intimacy level is needed to get that outcome.

I think maybe adding some subtle way of letting you know her intimacy level, maybe something in the description when you look at her would help.
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Re: Demo release: Emily - Sister attraction

Postby hakamazadd » Sat, 13Jun15 00:13

Hello! To say first - game with a plot with good potential, it's really getting you involved in process.

But on the other side - I'm stuck running out of themes (used every italic word) and still intimacy level of 0, when I try to watch movie, she says - it's too late. If I do watch movie instead of talknig - intimacy level is 1, but I can't guess right verbs to interact with her clothes, game always says "you are not wearing thong" or "thong is not on or into pussy".
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Re: Demo release: Emily - Sister attraction

Postby palmer_aif » Sat, 13Jun15 00:19

rabbie wrote:I did let her sleep on the matter, it was probably the intimacy level that let me down there...that was my first run through. 2nd time i did get the 3 conversations about sex and got her to the point where you can cum on the bed without ending the game - I'm not sure what intimacy level is needed to get that outcome.

I think maybe adding some subtle way of letting you know her intimacy level, maybe something in the description when you look at her would help.


Some good ideas. The only hint you get currently get is either by "Emily seemed to like that!", or by checking your stats.

You can defile the bed/yourself at any intimacy level by "[cum/unload/orgasm] {on/the/at} {the bed/bed/myself/me}" where everything in {} is optional, ie. "cum" will suffice. But if your intimacy level is 0 and Emily wakes up and finds you covered in semen, she'll be pissed :P However, the hornier she is the more forgiving she is. You can also wipe it off, avoiding this scenario.
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Re: Demo release: Emily - Sister attraction

Postby palmer_aif » Sat, 13Jun15 00:23

hakamazadd wrote:Hello! To say first - game with a plot with good potential, it's really getting you involved in process.

But on the other side - I'm stuck running out of themes (used every italic word) and still intimacy level of 0, when I try to watch movie, she says - it's too late. If I do watch movie instead of talknig - intimacy level is 1, but I can't guess right verbs to interact with her clothes, game always says "you are not wearing thong" or "thong is not on or into pussy".


Thank you! In order to watch the movie, you have to do it early during the evening, as it's about 2 hours long (i think). If you start watching it too late, she will not want to see it as she's too tired. There are currently only 3 levels of intimacy you can get, one of them is hinted pretty strongly in the read me, if not down right explained. The other might be a bit trickier to find.

You can only interact with her clothing when she's sleeping. But Adrift sometimes outputs the wrong reply, which might be the reason for your confusion. For instance, if you "x panties" when she's awake and covered in her jeans, you should get the response "Even if she did have a thong on, they were concealed by her jeans", but sometimes that doesn't work.
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Re: Demo release: Emily - Sister attraction

Postby whee » Sat, 13Jun15 02:38

You've got a great game in the making here! I've gotten really into the game so far, trying to figure out all the different paths. One thing I can't figure out, which might be a bug of sorts, is how to watch the movie. I know you said that you have to do it early or else Emily will say she's tired. I can't even get to that point. Whenever I try anything to do with the movie, it says that no good could come from watching a movie, but maybe I can watch one with Emily later. This happens even when Emily is there. I can't seem to figure out anything to ask her about.

I am somewhat new to these games, so maybe I'm just missing it from experience, but I figured out one level of interaction and am trying to find the others.
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Re: Demo release: Emily - Sister attraction

Postby nvtsbamf » Sat, 13Jun15 03:18

i cant get much to work here. "insert disc" tells me i need a movie, but i have the disc in hand. trying to ask emily about things doesnt seem to result in anything, and "talk to emily" just gives the same thing over and over
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Re: Demo release: Emily - Sister attraction

Postby Dolphin-BR » Sat, 13Jun15 04:49

In order to watch the movie you have to:
1- X dresser
2- Get movie
3- Look under bed
4- Put movie in DVD
5- play
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Re: Demo release: Emily - Sister attraction

Postby rabbie » Sat, 13Jun15 06:34

I asked emily "about do" which trigger the start of watching the movie, i thought it was a weird command since "something" was the word in italics
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Re: Demo release: Emily - Sister attraction

Postby redle » Sat, 13Jun15 08:21

Not sure whether this game will pass moderator inspection or not as it hits on 2 fairly big taboos.

Incest isn't my cup of tea, but from a gamer's standpoint I can generally ignore that point (among other things because I see who I'm interacting with, and they are clearly no relation to me). Still, it's often fairly easy for the writer to simply slap in the word 'step' at the beginning, and the general taboo stays while the actual moral/scientific issues disappear (as in step-sister). If that concept is even just tossed in once, most places in the story can go on using simply sister with no problems at all.

The underage thing is a bit more touchy. The intro makes it seem ok... guy possibly did some things in the past when younger, but goes away. He then returns after he is of age and here is where the story will start. Then we find out, no, we are playing the acts of him before he went away. Granted, by displaying images of the person, and the images being of a person over 18, it is somewhat muted. But the game reminds us quite often of the 14 year old nature of the person. Regardless of whether the people in the story are age appropriate for each other, the player is supposed to see themselves doing these interactions (that's ignoring the issue of whether people that age should be doing such things at all). Also, the topic of the photo-shoot. Obviously, an 18+ contest is not going to allow submissions of a 14 year old subject.

If it were me, I'd prefer either some vague, maybe some things happened when we were younger (without getting into specifics), and everything starts upon the guys return from his trip. Him now being 19-20, whatever... and the girl having just turned 18. Or, to keep the story intact as it is, just push the ages up to 18 and 20 before he gets sent away.

Mom and Dad met a few years ago. Had a whirlwind courtship and got married within a month. Suddenly I had a new step-sister. She's been in a private, all-girls boarding school growing up and is pretty shy/inexperienced. I didn't like the new parent and thought it all happened too fast. Started rebelling right away. Grew out my hair, etc, etc... Anyway, new sis and her parent were never close, as she was always away at school. Next thing I knew she kind of latched on to me as our parents started arguing a lot and realized maybe they made a mistake. Didn't like her latching on, but it seemed to get under the skin of the new parent. Eventually I got used to it, and then we actually grew pretty close. I guess that brings us to today. It's been going on 5 years now and that sis is now 18. My parents are downstairs yelling at each other (and I'm going to find out in a couple days they are actually going through with a divorce). Emily's in her room trying to act like nothing's happening. Me? I'm an emotional roller-coaster. One minute I want to throw my arms around my sis and shield her from all the crap life has put her through, and the next I want to toss her onto the bed, go at it like bunnies, and listen to her screaming out my name in pure passionate joy. Did I mention she really grew up this past year, and dang is she hot? No? Well, back to reality... I guess I should go check on her.
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Re: Demo release: Emily - Sister attraction

Postby Dole » Sat, 13Jun15 09:41

Can anybody tell me to get out the paper ball from the bathroom door so I can peek.

Aso how I can reach intimacy level of 3.

Lower intimacy level

pull panties
pull up shirt
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Re: Demo release: Emily - Sister attraction

Postby palmer_aif » Sat, 13Jun15 11:14

nvtsbamf wrote:i cant get much to work here. "insert disc" tells me i need a movie, but i have the disc in hand. trying to ask emily about things doesnt seem to result in anything, and "talk to emily" just gives the same thing over and over


This sounds like a bug with Adrift, and it's quite annoying. If you for instance type "x face", sometimes it wont work. But if you type it again it will. There's currently no way for me to fix these issues, which are inherent in Adrift, and it sounds like you've encountered this. Hopefully stuff like this will be fixed in later versions of Adrift 5.
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Re: Demo release: Emily - Sister attraction

Postby palmer_aif » Sat, 13Jun15 11:48

redle wrote:Not sure whether this game will pass moderator inspection or not as it hits on 2 fairly big taboos.


Thanks for taking the time to play and comment by writing such a lengthy and well thought out reply!

You're definitely right about the theme, it's not for everybody. One idea is to to explicitly state in the readme that the game features two underarge siblings "experimenting", so that players can avoid playing it alltogether would be better? I'm not quite clear on the rules of this forum, but as I've seen games posted here by Goblinboy (who has this theme in a lot of his games), I assumed it was okay. I've also received a lot of emails from people saying they liked the theme of the game, and that they understood it was fiction and had no problems with it. Obviously, we all have different tresholds when it comes to AIF.

Again, thanks for playing the demo and commenting, much appreciated!
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