by tlaero » Sat, 10Oct09 10:17
I definitely appreciate that she has human proportions rather that giant breasts. I don't know if you did that due to my advice from the last game, or if it just worked out that way this time, but I think it's a big improvement. I'll be interested in hearing if you get any complaints. (I hope not. She looks good.)
Conisder this. What is the likelyhood of a girl stripping completely naked in front of you, but then not letting you touch the outside of her left leg until you've touched the outside of her right leg?
I'd like to see you make your games a bit more realistic. It can still be just, "She had you over, taught you some history, and had sex with you," if you want, but the characterization could be better.
On the touch scenes, what if they started with her fully clothed, and it was through caressing body parts that she lets you take off articles of clothing? Etc.
Although, there's the bigger problem that she stripped, you caressed her, then she got dressed so you could have sex, then she took her clothes back off so that she could do it some more.
You've started making things more realistic with the art, and that's awesome. The next step is to make things a bit more realistic with the story.
Tlaero