Hallo Lagooners,

Hier eine neue Version der Geschichte von mir. "Kleiner, schneller ...."
"Lura" und das nächste Spiel "Predatora" sind Abfallprodukte für ein größeres Projekt.

Lura-Special:



Ein immer geiler Pilot und eine scharfe AI als Bordcomputer.. die AI baut sich einen Körper um endlich Sex zu haben .....ja... das muss einfach knallen.


Spielt das Spiel einfach mit.. continue ... durch ..dann kennt ihr die Rahmenhandlung.

Die hotspots sind immer an der gleichen Stelle. Sie verzweigen zu den sexuellen Inhalten.
Am Ende...da wo ihr den Tempel seht..verzweigt das Spiel zu seinen dramatischen Ende-Bilder.

Hier der Link.... 121 MB...

https://hotfile.com/dl/198631930/3d0a202/Lura_Special.rar.html

enjoy!!!

Sorry for this comment!!

I find this not nice. Am I doing something wrong?
Is this story really so stupid that no one says anything?
Since I lose all desire to put something here in!
Download 231 times. No problems? No errors?

I need feedback!!!

Josefus,
My kinetic novel "The Elf and Warrior" has been downloaded over 1500 times without any comments, so I can understand how you feel. I know it's disheartening when you work hard on something and don't get any comments. Having said that, please keep in mind that people do not have to be members here to download, but they must be members to post comments. Don't get discouraged, and don't quit!
I haven't played the game, but it appears you used the Michael 4 and Victoria 4 models. Perhaps you might consider using some of their morphs for future games.

Very respectfully,
fleet.

Josefus wrote:Sorry for this comment!!

I find this not nice. Am I doing something wrong?
Is this story really so stupid that no one says anything?
Since I lose all desire to put something here in!
Download 231 times. No problems? No errors?

I need feedback!!!

I found several errors with this game:

1) Couldn't get it to work with firefox, Chrome and it managed to work to some degree with IE
2) I clicked the british flag and a window appeared to tell me language selected to english, when i went to play the game the text was in german
3) The images and text do not fit onto the screen properly and i have the max resolution possible on my laptop and to view the images i had to zoom out, but to read the text i had to zoom in and that occured on every page as I continued through the story
4) Because of the porblem stated above it made the game very fustrating to the point i wasn't really concentrating on what i was doing and i keep missing how to progress with the story to achieve any kind of ending. Even after more than 20 playthroughs.
5) There was no "read me" file attached with the game so that caused, for me, a bit of irritation without being able to tell what the story is about, How the stroy works or introducing the characters or just any real general info about the game.
6) On the screen with the solar systems i found myself having to click 3-4 times to bring up descriptions or info about the planets and then having to click 3-4 times more to close it off which, again, was irritating.

fensome7 is right. you have good skill to create a scenario and to illustrate it, but for the html/js code, you will need more check before publishing your game :

• html mistakes :
  

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  <img id="Hauptbild" style="background:url(images/Blumen.jpg",)" src="images/TitelB2_2.jpg" width="1000" height="700 ," usemap="#Map" />

  
  Your url attribut miss a first "
  
• Css mistakes :
  http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/validator on your style.css give 11 errors.
  
• display mistakes :
  http://xn--pp-oia.com/Hcy4
  
  1. In this case, the mistake is the height value :
  

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  <div class="bobbleM" id="BM01" style="position: absolute; left: 10px; top: 50px; width: 180px; height: 1px; display: inline;">

  
  1px is too small, just remove it to get a working box.
  
  2. What browser did you try your game ?
  Ie10, seamonkey 2.16 (= firefox 19) or Opera give me this result when I try to launch your game.
  This is really a nogo for most people who will see this when playing your game (except if they just don't care about the script).
  
  

  Tested on W2K with IE5.01, NN4.77, and Opera6.0b1, and on W98 with IE6.0, NN4.75, Mozilla0.9.5, Opera5.12, and Opera6.0b1.

  
  Seriously ? you haven't found something more recent to use ? All cited os or browser are no longer used/available (or must not be used for ie6).

The first two are not serious issues, but easy to avoid. Last one can be a more tricky, but really need to be fix.

Sorry to be so hard on you, but this error was also present in your previous game.

Potential for a good game but i have to mention the same as someone else has before on a previous game.... you need to stop putting black text on dark backgrounds! It makes it impossible to read what is happening and as such impossible to play...

You need to either but the text on a separate background on the image or put it beneath the images...

Hallo Lagooners,

Thank you for your comments.

That's a great help for me. .... look at my pictures.... putting black text on white backgrounds!

Ok.. i will try to repair this mistakes...

Josefus wrote:Hallo Lagooners,

Thank you for your comments.

That's a great help for me. .... look at my pictures.... putting black text on white backgrounds!

Ok.. i will try to repair this mistakes...

Your main problem seems to be that you are writing code that only works on your own setup. Try asking in the Dev's section how they manage to get graphics to display correctly on various browsers, etc - I'm sure they will be happy to share their know-how with you.

Hi kessie8yl,

Exactly ... I've used! I say it again and again. If no one tells you that I write shit ... one can not know that.
I test my games! 4 different systems. More I can not afford it!
Thank you for this comment. I write this game again.

Back to Tlaero look. That you need .... 800 by 600 pixels, 1900 files .... No help ... wiggle animations. Fucking story ... and 1000 apologies if it is not running. yes ...one language...

Nobody translate this games OR???

nobody writes ... whether to rotate the planet ....
nobody writes if he see this big gif-files corekt.
Play is called ... try it sometime.
The game just ... --- continue --- That can play even after a year.
I know games ... logically ... "the best" ... because you need besides the Wörtenbuch another Walktrough.

Those who want to change the language (Sorry for my english) .... ... Notepad open _begin.html and switch "long" .. everything is commented out ... Tlaero-Standard

nice weekend

Personally. i stop trying to play your game, because i don't understand German and i got so much difficulty to apply the english patch. So it was easier for me to stop trying, even with the help of the Lagoners. If the english patch work well in this one, it will be a pleasure to try it !!

This game looks interesting, though the link in now removed. If you needed translation, i could translate it to English / Italian.

But again, only if you need it translated, unless you have scrapped this project (by the sounds of it, you have scrapped the game).

Josefus wrote:Hi kessie8yl,

Exactly ... I've used! I say it again and again. If no one tells you that I write shit ... one can not know that.
I test my games! 4 different systems. More I can not afford it!
Thank you for this comment. I write this game again.

It's not a case of you writing shit - you're just writing for a very narrow audience. The thing about the text not displaying properly is something we've been telling you from the beginning, so you can't say that you haven't had any feedback. If all you do is ignore it then you should not be surprised when people give up offering it.

I'm no games developer but even with my little knowledge I know there are ways of writing "universal" code which means you don't need to buy every single graphics card on the market just to prove something will work on them.

The versions of browser you quoted in a previous post are all very old but I think you will find that most people in the lagoon are the sort who grab the latest update as soon as they are able. No wonder the pages don't display the same way.

The only alternative would be to specify which setup is the best for getting the game to work properly but I doubt there would be many people willing to "downgrade" their browsers just to try your games.

That's my last Comment to this.

45 user have tested "Double Sick2" and "Lura" again....
Resume:
all can correct switch the language...
all can correct open and close the planet-infobox.... drag and click

1 user has color problems with textbox in "Double sick---Headline (black font ---gray background)

This computer (Win8) is configured for red / green-weakness.
Please... send me more infos to this problems...

That's not html ...or javascript- problems!!!

Josefus wrote:That's my last Comment to this.

45 user have tested "Double Sick2" and "Lura" again....
Resume:
all can correct switch the language...
all can correct open and close the planet-infobox.... drag and click

1 user has color problems with textbox in "Double sick---Headline (black font ---gray background)

This computer (Win8) is configured for red / green-weakness.
Please... send me more infos to this problems...

That's not html ...or javascript- problems!!!

I already suggested that you take this to the Dev's area where I'm sure there will be people with the info you need who are happy to help you

Josefus wrote:That's my last Comment to this.

45 user have tested "Double Sick2" and "Lura" again....
Resume:
all can correct switch the language...
all can correct open and close the planet-infobox.... drag and click

1 user has color problems with textbox in "Double sick---Headline (black font ---gray background)

And now? All other with problems are liars? Or to stupid to play the game? You ask for feedback... and after you got it you are trying to defend that there are no problems... why don`t you try to find out where the problem is? Start with reading the suggestions here...

btw I think you are replying very rude and unpolite to the made comments... you asked for feedback and if you don`t like it its your problem so relax!