by tlaero » Mon, 10Sep06 11:23
Thanks gooding. Nice work. Your games are improving.
I like that there's a fair amount of non-sex stuff to do in the game. Games where you have to work for the payoff are more satisfying than ones that you don't. The adventure style of this ("quests" etc) works for me.
I also like the way you did dialog choices. It's good that there are actual consequences for saying the wrong thing.
I like the sounds, especially during foreplay.
I like your art style. The images are well drawn despite the complaint I'm about to make.
I'm assuming you're making games that you want to play (not that you think others want), and that's what you should do. My tastes don't match yours, and that's okay.
But, if you wanted to branch out a bit, it would be awesome to get a few girls with human sized breasts. The beach balls most of them are sporting are really rediculous. I think you'd find that breasts are pretty cool, even when they're smaller than the woman's head...
As for the sex scenes, I'm sorry, but I just don't find them erotic. I like the foreplay sections, and think you could do more of it (undressing, kissing body parts, etc).
The place where you should devote the most thought, though, is the intercourse scenes. One pulsating image and needing to wait a while for it to pulse a little faster, only to wait longer for it to pulse more, etc just doesn't work for me.
At the very least, you should make it so that clicking the buttons makes it immediately advance to the next intensity level. If I want the pulsating to be done in 5 seconds, let me click through it. If I'm into it, I'll sit and watch for however long I want. Put me in control of how long the scene lasts. Right now it's kind of a chore to sit through it.
Another thing to consider. What if you had the graphics do exactly what they're doing now, but have hit targets on them that play other sounds? Maybe she'll moan more emphatically if you click certain spots during the scene. If I had something to do, I'd enjoy it more.
Tlaero