Lake party by lessonofpassion

[game player]

Best game of yours since Jordan. The girls weren't up to your usual standards though. The puzzle elements helped make it like a real game. I just wish it could have been longer. I was able to solve the various paths fairly quickly. I also like this writer much better than the person who has been writing your games recently.

[EscapeEvade]

I think Ashley is one of the best girls LoP has done in a while. Loved her design and loved her personality!

Big kudos to them.

[DL95]

Nice game!

Does anyone know if

Is there a way to go further than the blowjob in the Sauna Threesome?

[rabbie]

I do think you could tease a little more, putting the boobs up on the main page or early in the game lessens that feeling of discovery a little. Saying that, this might be my favourite game from you, good work.

[Agrippa]

I also like this writer much better than the person who has been writing your games recently.

Well, now I feel quite inadequate

Joking aside, I know my style is not for everyone and I myself have quite a few doubts regarding what is or isn't good for an erotic script, but that doesn't mean I won't try to do the best I can; so, any tips or concrete criticism? It would be much appreciated.

And I agree: the game is one of our best in quite some time.

Agrippa

[EscapeEvade]

The story was really good. It was a bit confusing with respect to Ashley at times; I didn't get the feeling off the bat that she was a friend already. Maybe a bit more of an intro where the player can get an idea of what the boundaries are. I would suspect that, when talking to a female friend, you can get away with some more stuff than with a girl you're trying to get from scratch.

Like, I think the game did a better job informing me that I could get away with things with Lilly, like

asking her to remove her shirt on the tennis court.

[phreaky]

Been playing around with this game, basically get to 5 endings

Overall I think it's a fun game and enjoyed playing it

The gameplay is quite interesting, it reminds me of your previous games such as the one with office settings (forgot the title) or the 7-day-quest, and to be honest those are the LOP games I enjoyed the most, a bit of a mix of adventure and dating

The characters are okay, I'm not really a fan of either girl, ashley's skin is a bit too realistic for me, and I like girls with smoother skin
Lily is okay, but her face expression is weird sometimes
Both girls are not pretty by your standard, and there were better looking girls in your previous games (jordan, kelly, to name a few)

The sex scenes are also okay, and the cumshots are good. No complaints there

Overall it's a good game with nice story, you should do more games with similar gameplay, maybe the only downside is the MnF style of "click and rub her leg" or "click and lick her tits", I don't think its that interesting (someone did mention about this in previous page)

And I hope for better looking girls next time

[Budokai]

Is there a way to get more than the blowjob in the threesome?

[kessie8yl]

Been playing around with this game, basically get to 5 endings

There are 5 endings? I'm missing something...

1. Ashley alone in the sauna
2. Lily (Lisa, or whatever her name is) alone in the barn
3. A little girl on girl in the sauna followed by a bj
4. Bad end

The only other one I can think of is when you get both in the sauna but leave without the bj (as if! lol) - but the end of that is the same as number 3...

[phreaky]

@kessie8yl
There's one more ending which also happens in the barn

[Franco]

There were some errors in English usage I noticed: Early in the game, 'Pete' is called 'Pet'; 'chick' was used when the word should have been 'cheek'; the correct word is 'keyhole', not 'lock hole'. There were a few other English errors I can't recall now.

The game was too easy. I don't really like the Meet and Fuck style used for the interface in sex scenes, it's too easy. Backgrounds were good, but I didn't care much for how the girls were graphically portrayed. Girls in earlier games were better looking. I liked how the girls' were given different personalities, making them appear more individualistic and real.

Overall, I enjoyed the game, though you have done better.

[Agrippa]

Actually, that's kind of (urgh, this is going to hurt) my fault. While beta-testing I noticed some typos and, as writerchick24 wasn't available at the time, offered to correct them. The game was urgent and I did not double-check some things. Mostly, I forgot to mark some of the corrected lines. Sorry about that, I know how much it can hurt to see a glaring chick when you expected to kiss a cheek.

While the personalities of the girls were definitely different, when have we done a game with multiple love interests that weren't distinguishable? Not saying we haven't, it's just that, after about 30 projects, everything starts blurring together; much like when you wake up with a pounding headache, chained to a bed, and with the certainty that, no matter how much fun you had the night before, you are going to pay for it in spades. Or like when you correct a text and find out that you forgot to mark the worst typo there was in it.

Agrippa

[gamebp]

I think that Lily has been renamed ashley on the tennis court.
I like the graphics.

[QcBern]

''Chestnut Schuffles'' is credited as having created the visuals for this game.

''Yamyoda'' is credited as having done the same for LOP Gold's ''living with temptation''.

The graphics are remarkably similar...

They're one and the same, aren't they ?

We're talking about the same illustrator, aren't we ?

QcBern

[leonizer]

Hello QcBern - I can assure you that CS and YY don't share the same body
Artwork might look similar cause it is made according to precise LOP guidelines - in terms of scene lightning, shaders, models look and feel.