phreaky wrote:@squeeky
I don't think we need a new thread. The discussion about tlaero's reaction is getting cool down anyway. Let's just wait for her to return here, I'm really sure it will happen soon

While we wait, just out of curiosity, I want to ask you guys, overall (physical presence, characters, style) which girl do you like more, christine or keeley ?

Bodywise i prefer Keeley, because i just like it curvy and Keeley is a VERY well done model who is both near-to-perfect-curvy while still remaining realistic and believable. Of course Christine is very hot too, personally i like her face and hair better than Keeleys. But the most important thing is, that the girls don't look all alike, like it's the case in some other games. That's what makes it exciting for me.

My all time favourite of your models is still Amy by the way! She's just the perfect combination of believable, girl-next-door-cute and buxom. Would LOVE to maybe see more of her some time.

I have yet to complete the game entirely but I think I can give my first thougts.

The story and events : The story is nice, but if I remember correctly, Keeley was more adventurous in the previous episodes which is weird since it seems she now wants to break the routine. I like how there are many characters and events.
My favorite event was
The gameplay in itself was really good and I play through the game very smoothly (maybe it is a little difficult to select shops in the mall at first, but it gets easy when we get used to).

My main critic about the game is about choices. First let me tell you since I did not discovered everything, I might be wrong. It seems the choices are only punishing, I mean, when you make a choice it only allows you to get an event or prevent you to get it. It is perfectly fine to have punishing choices, but allowing some choices to get a different event or a different path could be great. But maybe that would not fit with the score system.

I have a question about a scene :


In conclusion I thank both of you a lot for this game !

P.S : I hope this doesn't sound too negative, but when I give feedback I selfishly tend to mention what I did not like (even if I really enjoy the game in general), hoping to get something more suiting to my tastes for the next time.

I am pretty worried about the discussion going on here.

Life with keeley is phantastic and i recommend to tlaero to move on and let us enjoy more of the fantastic work that has been done and hopefully will be done in the future.

I would also need a little help > i am stuck in the wedding scene when touching keeleys breast > please help

Best regards to tlaero

phreaky wrote:@thundergod
What's the difference between 'look at' and 'watch' ? I'm just curious

Showing me a bunch of portrait-like poses of them, I prefer Christine.

But when she's doing stuff (I don't just mean sexual stuff, I mean anything) there's an expressiveness to Keeley that I don't think you quite achieved with Christine. I'm not really sure how to describe it, but since they were both in this game, I had the opportunity to compare.

One thing I'd like to compliment you on, BTW, is that your models sometimes close their eyes. It stands out because it's so rarely done in other games.

ace4 wrote:I would also need a little help > i am stuck in the wedding scene when touching keeleys breast > please help

I assume you mean when she's sitting on the bed? If so:

Thai women?
Dark shinned, petite, very little pubic hair, small breasts and nipples the size of the last joint of your thumb, both diameter and length... Ah memories; sigh.
Lou
The absolutely most beautiful were Katois (spelling). Males that dressed as women. More than one GI took a cutie to the hotel only to find her penis was larger than his!!!

Now THERE'S a new game idea! Asian Sex Tourism disguised as a Business Trip ! You even have one of the "Bad Endings" (unless you swing that way).

I like racial and body type variety. The trouble is, Who's going to make a sexy game that's NOT populated by tight-bodied, well-endowed cartoon porn stars? A slender, small-chested model might be construed by some to be encouraging cartoon child pornography! Imagine the outcry if Tlaero and Phreaky featured models with larger than perfect noses or a little "spare tire" around the tummy? I'm afraid we're stuck with professional-porn-bodied white girls, because that appeals to the most viewers and offends the least.

I'm going to skip past the present discussion and just post my thought on the game.

Firstly I really enjoyed how varied the different scenes were. The new "non-linearity" was really good as well since it made me think of what I was doing rather than just looking for the thing to click that would progress the story. Running into the characters from the other games was a nice touch also.

The one thing I would like to see more of is the way the sex scenes branched off in Daydreaming about Keeley, I really liked the sense of participation that gave.

Yet another fantastic game guys. Thank you ever so much!

phreaky wrote:@squeeky
I don't think we need a new thread. The discussion about tlaero's reaction is getting cool down anyway. Let's just wait for her to return here, I'm really sure it will happen soon

While we wait, just out of curiosity, I want to ask you guys, overall (physical presence, characters, style) which girl do you like more, christine or keeley ?

For me both are awesome but if I have to choose: Christine.

As I'm used to, I'm translating "Life of keeley" in french.

I've found a funny translation :

When Christine and Adrian are in the car. In file car2b.html.

"French her back", is a typically slang english expression, not so easy to translate in french.
"Fais lui l'anglais en retour" is not good...No of course, only French can do that well. N'est-ce pas?

I found : "Roule lui un patin".....

May be someone have another idea?

I take this opportunity to ask Tlaero and Phreaky permission to release my translation.(When I finished and I need a few more days)

No modication, only translation and added color to the text for each character.
Thanks

I have merely called up that html page.
"French her back".
Ok. Since they are "french kissing" tongues in mouth, then it seems he has to attempt to lick her back. Is that correct? Like, working just from that page there are clearly variables which have been set which do not allow me to follow that option unless of course that mouse selection takes one to the a page where she asks something about "exhibitionism". Would "Lick her back", "Tongue her back" work?

As to getting permission may I suggest that you PM phreaky as tlaero has advised on taking temporary leave of the Lagoon and is unlikely to see your communique.

Squeeky wrote:Is that correct?

No. It's unheard of in English, as an expression.

I can't really offer an alternative until I know what the original intent was. "Lick her back"? Then that would be the translation, though a very basic and non-sexy one.

"Return her French kiss" would be "if she has been French-kissing you, do the same to her," but it's still an uncomfortable phrasing.

@thundergod:
I think that I took Serge too literally!
Now that's not necessarily surprising since "back" has the meanings of "return" and part of one's anatomy, alas I chose the latter, and I thought in literal terms

So, Serge, I guess that leading up to car2b.html she has offered the "french kiss", tongue in mouth. Maybe your phrase then is "Return her [french kiss]".

Serge wrote:As I'm used to, I'm translating "Life of keeley" in french.

I've found a funny translation :

When Christine and Adrian are in the car. In file car2b.html.

"French her back", is a typically slang english expression, not so easy to translate in french.
"Fais lui l'anglais en retour" is not good...No of course, only French can do that well. N'est-ce pas?

I found : "Roule lui un patin".....

May be someone have another idea?

I take this opportunity to ask Tlaero and Phreaky permission to release my translation.(When I finished and I need a few more days)

No modication, only translation and added color to the text for each character.
Thanks

Salut Serge
Je croit que ''Retourne lui le baiser'' ou ''Retourne le baiser'' serais un terme plus compréhensible que ça soit en France et le Français nord américain..

@serge

I have no problem if you want to relesase the game in french, I am sure tlaero won't mind either

Guys

I've got 29/35 and it keeps telling me I've failed at the end. Can anyone please tell me where the least obvious points are to be gained?

I've looked at the pictures and



is this what I am missing?

Thanks!