Revenge or Romance

[fleet]

Follow the story of a woman from Ohio who travels to California in search of the man responsible for the death of her son. Will she find the revenge she seeks or something else?
The ending you get depends on choices you make.
Adults only, sexually explicit.

This is a visual novel. It is not a fuck fest (although it does contain sexually explicit scenes); my purpose is to tell a story.

EDIT: The zip file is a stand alone game, which includes an executable file. Some browsers (Google Chrome) may identify it as malicious. It is not.


New download link https://docs.google.com/uc?id=0B2xwa6LsMHzmQWlGWUw5MGFQUnM&export=download


very respectfully,
fleet

[trarum]

And now we all have to register at wolflore?

[fleet]

And now we all have to register at wolflore?

I hope to upload the visual novel to rapidshare sometime next week (I have limited computer access over the next several days).

[fleet]

I uploaded the visual novel to rapidshare and added the link to the first post in this topic.

[kessie8yl]

Well I've played it several times but it always ends in Romance. All the alternatives to the sex scene ending result in the game ending very quickly with her going home, deciding not to punish him further... Which is still "romantic" in my book. The title cries out for at least one other ending.

If you feel you can't have an end that doesn't include a sex scene, why not just make one outcome where she tells him she wants kinky sex - including bondage, S&M and hard anal. After that she leaves but the next thing he knows the police are raiding his house and arresting him on a charge of rape. She's planned it all along and has lined up "witnesses" to support her case, plus she has the marks on her body from the sex games. You could even include a very intimate "medical examination" as the forensic evidence is gathered from her...

With his previous record he loses all his remission from the killing of her son, plus the sentence for the rape, so spends another 25 years in jail. The players get some extra sex and your story gets the "revenge" element, as advertised )

[fleet]

I've posted a new download link in the first post of the topic.

[kessie8yl]

I've posted a new download link here and in the first post of the topic.
new download link https://hotfile.com/dl/198941135/60ca503/revenge.zip.html

Is this the exact same game or an updated version?

[fleet]

@kessie8yl,
It's the same game that you played previously and provided feedback; I've just changed host sites.

very respectfully,
fleet

[fleet]

Hotfile was shut down so I posted a new download link in the first post of this topic.

[kessie8yl]

I'm surprised at the lack of comments for this game..

Despite my disappointment at what I considered to be the lack of a satisfactory "revenge" ending, it is still a considerably better game than many I've seen.

Credit where it's due. The game was very playable and not at all unpleasant. I just thought - and still think - that an extra ending would make it better - but that doesn't diminish the amount of good work that's gone into producing this game.

Thank you

[fleet]

You are welcome.

[Rikwar]

Thanks fleet for some reason I missed this one

[fleet]

Rikwar,
You can find all of my VNs by using the New Lagoon's "Advanced search" feature. Search for posts where fleet is the author in the "All sexy games" forum, and search within "First posts of topics only"

EDIT: There's also a kinetic novel ("The Elf and the Warrior", a story where the player does not make any choices) in the Sexy Girls forum.


Very respectfully,
fleet