by Tjommi » Sun, 09May24 00:06
Congratulations on your new game! I haven't been to your site for quite a while, I like the new? ( as I said I haven't been there for a while, ) design on the website.I really enjoy playing those small adventure games like the ones that you have made. Before I begin with the review, I would like to point out that I am not a part of Shark's staff, I am just a regular here on this site. So these are my opinions and mine alone.
Well now down to business. I think that the timers in the game are generally to long. Especially the flight in the beginning of the game. Unless there is some eastern eggs hidden in there that I don't know about there should be an ability to skip the intro. I've tried the game 10 times in a row now, and clicked around on just about anything that I can think of. I am guessing the major eastern egg is how to seduce the receptionist, as I failed there. however I got the girl at the airport, and the maid obviously as it was impossible not to get her. The grapichs and the story of the game was ok. I apprechiated that you even bothered to make a story around the game, as way to many don't.
My main problem with this game is that I have seen all this before. I do understand that making a game is a long and demanding process, heaven's know that I could never have done it. However allthough there was a story this was fairly straight forward with familiar hentai girls in positions that we have seen before in settings we have seen before. It got this classic japanese "storybook" game buildup. Now I did most likely miss one girl as I never figured out how to seduce the receptionist as I allready said. I didn't like the end of the game. it was way to sudden, and left me with the feeling that I was trying an unfinished beta version of the full game. The first time I played the game it was interesting and entertaining. However the only reason I played it again was because I wanted to try to the best of my ability to give you fair and well thought out feedback on it. Now I know I am beeing harsh now, perhaps I am harder than I should. If I do hurt your feelings I apoligize for that. I think that the game is using a well tried formula on good and bad. The good is that since this have been done countless times before, you know it work and you will get an instant hit. The bad is that I at least would not come back and play it again.
I see alot of potentional for this game. Your scenario opens up for alot of interesting pathways that you can build upon. What I would like to see is some eastern eggs perhaps, I would like to see more pathways. Unless I screwed up roally I only see now that you can decrease your options buy threading off the safe path, ( allways be nice and polite. )This could get solved by either adding more girls, or adding more scenario options with the existing girls of the game. Using pure dialogue to drive the game forward is fine. An idea would perhaps to write more dialogue actually and use the pathway that you take in the dialogue to lead you into various situations. You see the way the game looks now it looks like the earlier meet and fuck productions crossed with the classic storybook games where you got the illution of control as you click to drive the story onwards. Your game is better than the classic storybook games, and it's equal to the earlier meet and fuck games. Sadly it does not come up to the best games in the adventure genre. Sharks games, The newer meet and fuck games, ArianneB, dating crystal.. .these are the games that you compete with. Allthough you have made a decent game, you need to find a way to spice things up if you want people to return and play this game agian.
That is at least my 2 cents.
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, Erana, you honestly tell us that there is no way to get the receptionist? I am very frustrated because the receptionist is in my opinion the most pretty girl of the three!
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