To wake up this forum

[shark]

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I think that this forum is falling asleep
Here, I hope, something to wake it:

(The game is ended and on-line. The link was removed to the aim of release the server)

It is the second part of the game and I propose it to you for your comments.

Before working on the last part (I need a break), I wish that we end both first parts:

-the dialogues are too simple and, certainly, full of mistakes. I always wait for somebody who agrees to write them (not to translate my dialogues but totally to imagine dialogues corresponding with the actions, and, if possible, sexy)

-Our girl (who still has no name) is still dumb. Robert suggested taking charge of sounds but I still have no files ready to be integrated into the game (we needs sounds adapted to each situation and which are all adjusted at the same volume level)

Who still works with me on the project?.. I need a team because the game is not ended…

[beni]

I think that is very good. the different toys are funny to find.

[shark]

thank you to be the first

[ClaudioP]

I'm very busy at work in those days.
Usually I do graphic, sound, and coding in the week-end, but now im working also on saturday and sunday...

My graphic style is too much different from the "3D" style you use in the game, so I'll try to give other help.

Maybe I'll try to set up a dialogue.

[Razel]

Let me know what I can do to help.

[Mr. Sparkle]

Looks Fan-dam-tastic!!!!

[chris1965]

Just finished the second part....great fun....just please hurry with the last part.....oh and the dialogue...!!

[funny]

Shark!!

This is really great! Sorry I have been missing, I lost my internet conection and even now I am on dial up!!

I really like the last part of the game, my favorite pose is the part where you tickle her pussy with the flower, beautiful how you drew that! The spanking part is also very well done!!

Dialogue is really hard to be original and everything, so this is very much a draft, and if anyone has any comments/suggestions/changes please make them!!!!

1st section:

"I had imagined that something like this would happen to me on day"..."Now it doesn't seem real".... "I just hope nobody sees us."

2nd section:

"Oh no, now I have made such a mess" ... "It is time for a spanking"

3rd section:

"I am so sore now" ... "I will just sit on my desk"

4th section (last part):

"I knew that you could have fun at work" ... "Do you have any ideas what to do now?"


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OK, so this dialogue is pretty cliched and unoriginal, but it was tough. I will try think of better things and come back and post more... please make a suggestion if you have one!!!

[shark]

Hello funny
I was worried about your silence. happy to read you...

I think your dialogues are interesting (no vulgarity, credible) and I would like that several persons participate.
I have some ideas in French, but they are expressions and "words games" difficult to translate.

Maybe there will be, among the forum visitors, a good writer to help us...

[Chunli_49]

The spanking part of the dialog is a bit stiffled.

Instead of saying, I am so shameful, she could say, I am such a dirty girl, I need a spanking!

And instead of my buttocks is burning. "My butt hurts" or "My ass cheeks are burning" is better. Same goes for "I will just down for a moment (or whatever it is exactly). It's better to say "I have to sit down" or "My ass hurts so much, I need to sit down".

It's all due to English being a confusing language for non native speakers. I'm a native English speaker so I hope you don't mind me commenting on the grammar mistakes.

Cheers.

[Chunli_49]

I like the style of the game too. Very well done and the toys are fun.

[ClaudioP]

I think is more pleasant to seduce a polite girl than a bitch.

I do not agree at all with Chunli_49. Better to be moderate.

[shark]

I cannot help for the English grammar, and I hope that specialists are going to make good dialogues…

For the style, it can be very sexy to have a polite and classy girl , but who uses, at certain moment, a little bit shocking words

[funny]

I agree with the more polite/classy girl type.

I had thought of some more dialogue today, but have now forgotten. I will keep a pen and pad and write things down when I think of something...during a meeting at work will be a good time.

[Chunli_49]

I can understand that, but it's still grammatically wrong to say I am so shameful. "I feel so ashamed" or "I am ashamed of myself" is grammatically correct.