by tlaero » Thu, 09Jun25 10:29
Hey Chaotic,
I appreciate you making the IE version of VDG. Thanks! It's a bummer that you need to make both versions though. I'm surprised that it's necessary. Are you sure the IE version doesn't work correctly in Firefox?
The changes you made for IE bring your code up to the standard. The old things were bugs that happened to work in Firefox. I'd be really surprised if the corrected code doesn't work there as well. Firefox can't require incorrect cookie code. It would fail on too many web pages.
If the IE code doesn't work on Firefox, maybe we can find a middle ground that works in both. It's a pain if you always have to make two versions of the code. I don't use Firefox, but I'll bet Erana could help.
Separately, in the 1.1 drop, I found a bug in the IE casinocheck10.htm.
vvar start = document.cookie.indexOf(cookieName + "=");
(Typo: "vvar" instead of "var"). That makes the game hang at that screen.
As for game feedback, I'm enjoying it. I like that what you buy in the stores opens new possibilities later in the game. That's a place where you've surpassed ArianeB.
I'm also enjoying the hitman backgrounds. I'm imagining a scenario where you're attending your cousin's wedding and you decide to hit on the southern belle you see there. Lots of neat potential things to do in that level, and it would result in a nice break from the, "take her to the bar, then the shop, then the strip club," progression these games tend to have in common.
I really like that Erica and Lei have such different personalities. It'll be hard to make them all distinct, but I appreciate the effort.
Suggestion: In the end, the game comes down to, "Have her drink n times and win m influence points." You might consider more complex influences. For instance, it wouldn't make sense to win an influence from just a walk in the park. But maybe have that account for a partial influence that, if combined with not lying about your job and holding the door for her somewhere ends up getting you a "gentleman" point or something.
Wouldn't work with Lei or Erica, for different reasons, but if the next girl is really smart (sees through your lies) and romantic (appreciates you holding her hand, etc), you could work out some nice paths to a win.
I'd also love to see a scenario where winning doesn't require getting the girl drunk. "Girl goes farther than she would otherwise because she's been drinking" is a bit stereotypical. It's cool for most of these dates, but it would be neat to have one girl that's above such things.
Suggestion 2: Negative influences. Rather than instant death when you say the wrong thing, give a negative influence. Get enough of those and she dumps you. But, have there be ways to recover from them and continue (ways to undo negative influences, etc).
You're currently using the existence of a cookie as your variables, but you could make your life a lot easier if you stored a value in the cookie and modified it. So, rather than haveing ERCdri1, ERCdri2, and ERCdri3, you could just have ERCdri that stores a value (1, 2, 3, etc). Then you could read the value and go straight to the right place rather than writing more htmls that check the next level cookie. That would also make it easier for you to add and remove points at will. If you need help figuring out how to do this, let us know.
Now some mildly negative feedback. I understand that it's a lot easier to put the options in text at the bottom of the screen, but I feel the game is much better served by clicking areas than text. For instance, in Lei's date, you could have clicking her butt says the ass line and clicking her head says the line she dumps you for. Having the option to have text at the bottom is good, but you should use it as infrequently as possible. Any time you can choose the text intelligently by clicking areas in the picture, you should. Gameplay is better that way.
And, lastly, most of the Asians I know are offended by people who call them, "Oriental." This is not to say people would be offended by your game. But it's likely that Lei (in game) would be offended by her date calling her that. I suggest a find/replace of "Oriental" to "Asian." Alternately, have her get mad at the phrase....
Keep up the great work,
Tlaero