I understand what you wanted to do Ariane. And it works fine, and the game is really awesome (not a little date game but a really good adventure that gives very much pleasure to play).
Where i think you have missed something, not essential, but that could make this game historical, is that the 4 stories are deconnected. The 4 stories are 4 possible ways to spend the same day with the main character.
Maybe it will have be cool if there was a 5th story where the player could 1) have a strange and dangerous date with Ariane 2) meet Rachel and the strange group of mmoplayers-scientists 3) prevent a girl to be touched by thunder/ play a nude volleyball contest / help the career of a young pornactress 4) have a nice ending with Ariane (here you can introduce the 5some ending^^).
A the 5th story will open only if you reach the ends of the 4 overs (scenario more like the Groundhog Day than a Tarentino).
But, this game is already so great, that's my suggestion is only the dream of a fan
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