Cochise wrote:Guess it's alright... far from the final masterpiece it's supposed to be though.
Pretty much sacrificed any depth to the sex scenes in favor of multiple girls. The new non-recycled models like the boss and the girl from the beach are good too, too bad the sex scenes are so shallow.
The shallowness of the sex scenes doesn't really bother me. There are millions of other porn movies out there that handle sex better then any html adventure game could.
My problem is really just the shallowness of everything. Yes, there are, like, what, six girls? Something like that. All of them are the same. Even more counting all those repetitive photoshoots. What's more, the dialogue just sucks. It's... shallow. Some random guy walks up to random woman holding a camera, says "Will you model for me?", then they decide to follow you for no reason. Then they all agree to nude photoshoots. It's just... Yeah. He really needs to do some better dialogue... and actually focus on making one good story then repetitive blehness. Look at cudgel's Brenda thing. It's a one path story featuring only one girl, but it's able to focus on making that one path enjoyable instead of making six identical paths that I can't even force myself to do all of.
And the bugs... considering that this is a simple html game, and most of the problems could have been edited out if he played it through once... I mean, it's not like this is Skyrim, where it's actually huge and varied and all the bugs are just typos.
As for the Off-site... if anyone is actually paying him for this... why? What has he done deserving of your money? Especially considering its a recurring fee after it was originally supposed to be 20 dollars once and done? If you just want to support him or whatever... can I have some money too? I'd gladly take your money, and I won't even make crap with it!