Virtually Date Crystal

[Metalbloke]

astringues wrote : Woaw ! Bonhomie's plans for developing the game sound great !
As for now, I experienced 8 different endings :
Party
- threesome
- rachel
- grab butt and sex
- pool -> phot -> cl + bj
- pool -> phot -> cl + sex

Casino
- street -> hotel -> show penis -> bj
- street -> hotel -> show penis -> cl + bj
- street -> hotel -> strip -> sex

Did I miss something

Maybe I'm just getting old, but what the heck is an CL?
The licking of an unmentional private part?

[muppet787]

Hi Guys,great game so far can't find all the right clicks yet. On the pose off I seem to remember (unless I as drunk) there being an option for a comedy pose? Was this before Izzy's first pose, before Crystal's first pose or her second pose?

Metalbloke CL is short for cunniligus

[qbv8]

Metalbloke, CL is the start of Cloé [img]kator/smiley245.gif[/img]

[Arnulf]

qbv8, if I'd be Cloé, I would sing you a special song, you never forget (if you survive).

[Jackadict]

You can joke. She is not there !

[Arnulf]

But she'll come back (like Arnie, the Terminator)

[Metalbloke]

muppet787 wrote : Metalbloke CL is short for cunniligus

Thanks. I wasn't that far off than...

On the pose off I seem to remember (unless I as drunk) there being an option for a comedy pose? Was this before Izzy's first pose, before Crystal's first pose or her second pose?

To begin, it depends on which of the two sequences of the POSE-OFF bit you are playing.

In the first sequence, where you are destined to lose, this option isn't available.
In the second, the correct one, it's in the first pose of Crystal.

Now all you have to do is to figure out how to trigger the correct sequence...

[Jackadict]

Arnulf a dit : But she'll come back (like Arnie, the Terminator)

Elle fait autant de dégats ?

[Arnulf]

Oui, mais seulement sous l'eau.

[erana]

Hey. I'm away for a few days, and what do I find?
Congrats, Chaotic. A good job overall. A few comments, of course. You are doing it in a completly diferent way than I would have done it (programing-wise), but it's just a matter of style, and yours does work, too. So I'm gonna coment on what you could improve, not in how it should be made

First, TheBrain has quite the point with the catch questions. They are unnecesary, or else they should include hints.

Also, I think, too, that the "adventure tree" really should be a bit less linear. Points where it branches to diferent things, instead of it being almost a "hit or miss" adventure.

I see you are using a simple "choose your own adventure" system with no scrïpts. Is certainly workable, and you are using it to great efect, but maybe you could save you much work in later ampliations even with very, very simple scrïpting. I don't mean the complicated programing of Ariane or of Spell for All, with functions, pages of variable content, etc. I mean that if you wanna have a simple event ("Did or didn't he do X?") that can afect a decission thirty steps later, using a simple variable would save you from the work of duplicating many, many pages.

Finally, the art is quite nice, there's little I could add to it, but a sugestion to improve it: the "weak point" are the facial expresions. Many pics seem to use the same "stock plastic grin" smile, that looks a bit artificial. Other pics, however, have carefully posed faces (the bar's are priceless), that show that you really know your way around them. I simply advise you to use them more often - posed faces add more to the end result than anything else. (Well, maybe you could also tweak the kiss face a wee bit)


That about sugestions for improvement, as you asked many pages ago (sorry for the delay).

As for sugestions for storyline, well... the options for Izzy+Rachel+Crystal, for Crystal+Casino Girl, and for "secret path to great 5-way fuzzball" certainly do have their atractive BTW, I have to compliment you in how the threesome is handled.

[muppet787]

Thanks metalbloke, found the right route to winning the piose off. Still can't find the right route to having Racheal alone as other payers have suggested. Can anyone give me any hints?

[Stormrider]

Nice Game! Thanks Chaotic, and everyone else for all the help

[muppet787]

Found the right route to having sex with Racheal only but only in the online version and not the downloaded version. Is it possible to have sex with Izzy either alone or in a threesome

[Dark Anghell]

muppet787, its simple: when you get into the photo-shoot with both girls and Racheal goes first in front of camera, you will have an option for her to do a sexy pose, I think funny pose and one where you ask her to get naked. You pick the one where she gets naked. Crystal will walk off, click continue and then you should be left alone with Racheal.

I think I have gotten all the endings. I enjoyed this game more than ArianeB...mainly because it's not so frustrating. ArianeB is way more complex.

[Arnulf]

Hi, MDK, nice avatar!