New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

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Re: New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

Postby Greebo » Thu, 10Mar11 14:49

Well done, il joker, your art is excellent and it's good to be able to navigate between frames properly. If I have one criticism it is that the dialogue is stilted, leaves a lot to be desired and doesn't approach the quality of the art. I realise that you may not be comfortable telling your story in english whereas art is a universal language.

I look forward to seeing Part 3
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Re: New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

Postby Squeeky » Thu, 10Mar11 15:57

il joker I did note your comment in response to mine re dialogue placement.

I didn't quite know how to phrase a comment regarding your use of English but what Greebo says is true; and yes writing in what is not your native language does have problems, once I tried writing to a Japanese lady, Oh! mon Dieu!!
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Re: New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

Postby il joker » Fri, 10Mar12 15:43

well, my friends, thank you so much for your appreciations...for the dialogues...well...i'm trying to do my best...and the third part is ready to be posted...have a nice time...
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Re: New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

Postby Sexychild68 » Sat, 10Mar13 03:40

really good job with part 3....nicely done....the only complaint that i have is that Ahmed face is really white with a sheen to it, other then that very nice modeling and a good quick story....keep up the good work....looking forward to you next project...
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Re: New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

Postby sinthoras » Sat, 10Mar13 18:29

great job with this project! I hope this wasnt your last one
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Re: New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

Postby il joker » Wed, 10Mar17 05:16

Don't be afraid...i have a new story ready to go...and another one on the way...If you continue to show your appreciations, maybe Mr.Shark will allow me to continue our collaboration...Thank you
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Re: New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

Postby David » Wed, 10Mar17 14:46

il joker wrote : Don't be afraid...i have a new story ready to go...and another one on the way...If you continue to show your appreciations, maybe Mr.Shark will allow me to continue our collaboration...Thank you


I'm looking forward to seeing them!

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Re: New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

Postby shark » Wed, 10Mar17 23:11

il joker wrote :maybe Mr.Shark will allow me to continue our collaboration...



With much pleasure…. Your work is excellent.
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Re: New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

Postby shark » Fri, 10Mar19 01:36

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" IL JOKER "is back and and gives us a new gift :
http://www.sharks-lagoon.fr/contrib/con ... _page.html
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Re: New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

Postby Sexychild68 » Fri, 10Mar19 08:05

another good one il joker...the joker parts were real funny...it would be nice to get that lucky in a sauna...keep up the good work...
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Re: New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

Postby Arnulf » Fri, 10Mar19 09:57

Respect, il Joker, you are a real BAD boy!!
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Re: New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

Postby il joker » Sat, 10Mar20 06:33

many thanks to all that appreciate my efforts...I hope you enjoy my works as I do...and, Arnulf...I'm not that bad...:-)...Respect, man...(between the lines...I have another one on the way...quite dialogued...but i think that this time you'll have to wait...or you become greedy...(thank you shark) )
Have a nice time...
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Re: New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

Postby sinthoras » Sun, 10Mar21 11:50

aww, too bad we have to wait. but its worth the waiting i bet [img]smile/xsgrin.gif[/img]
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Re: New 3D rendered story: "Naheela's pains"

Postby Wayne » Mon, 10Mar29 17:45

Hi guys!

I'm sure I would pretty much enjoy the artwork "Naheela's pains" if only...........the links to the episodes worked!!!!

There does not seem to be a html working link to the various parts!

Could you kindly give hints?

Thanks.

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