Asmodai wrote:Thanks guys! Here's another.

I graciously accept any and all criticism, I want to get better at this. Thanks!
The wink doesn't look right to be honest, the view of her teeth is normal with the angle of her head, as you would see those exact teeth from a real life angle like that.
I see shadow crosses on both of her butt cheeks which looks a little weird and the shadowing used has some over spill on her back to create a lot of unneeded shadow there also, as her back is picking up some light source, which it would be more or less in the light, with mild shadow cover.
Nice pose.
You should create your own thread for all of your artwork, and that way peeps can find it easily to view it and comment on it, as artwork even solely on redheads like this thread can get lost in the clutter when a thread becomes massive over time.
Nice work for not much experience with Daz.