Happy birthday, with love, your friend Rachel

[LostTrout]

I've recently been learning Daz. I wrote a little story and illustrated it with pictures. It's called Happy Birthday, with Love, Your Friend Rachel. What do you think?

I don't have a website, so I'm using a direct link.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/p1odlssviilo4nc/Happy%20birthday%20with%20love%20your%20friend%20Rachel.zip?dl=0

[fleet]

I enjoyed the story. You mentioned DAZ, but what software did you use to make the story in html format?

[hughx]

That's Twine with the SugarCube story format add-on.

It's a good story and the images are very nice.

[jvit]

Cute story, I liked it.

[BobbyTally]

Thank you for sharing your work. It is a nice story.

[Super]

Always nice to have some fluffy porn :3 Very nice

You thinking about doing something bigger?

[LostTrout]

I don't have much time, so I only make short pieces. I specifically started learning Daz because writing takes so long. Unfortunately, it took me an hour to make each picture. It's not much faster than writing.

I'm considering turning this into a game though. If I can think of enough material.

[Niauropsaka]

That was sweet! Nice to see.

[LostTrout]

I've tried to turn the story into a game but I can't think of enough good puzzles. The best I could think of was a puzzle where Rachel would have to get her parents out of the house so she could have sex in it but I couldn't think of a good solution.

If I want to turn it into a game, I need to give Rachel the option of having sex with other people. Given the nature of the story, I was worried that the game would end up with too much of a netorare feel. To balance that out, I needed the main romance path with Josh to have a mega sex scene in it. I decided that a good way to make a mega sex scene would be to let the player choose from many different positions to have sex in.

The upshot is that I ended up making a lot of pictures for all the different sex positions. I've uploaded a new version of the story. You can jump right to the end to view all the pictures.

[MalleckM]

You could make higher resolution. So far, it is too low.

[Blue]

Very nice!
Keep doing)

Sincerely, Blue

[LostTrout]

Thanks. Small pictures render faster. It's also easier to hide mistakes in them.

Bigger pictures would make me so frustrated that I wouldn't enjoy it. Making small pictures already tests my patience.