I find this story very offensive. This was nothing in the world but RAPE. The idea that a woman can be raped and if it goes on long enough she will begin to enjoy it and gain satisfaction is pure male illusion. Perhaps no other injury can be as totally devastating to a woman as being raped, and they are injured. Some few, recover after it happens, but many are traumatized for life.

There have been times when I have fought my man till we have torn up the whole surroundings, but it was a sham battle and we knew that submission and surrender was the ultimate goal, regardless of which of us won. But in that Instance the very battle was part of the arousal. In a real rape, the fear and pain prevent arousal, which prevents lubrication, which induces great pain and physical damage.

LRM wrote :

This was PMed to me by a female member that asked to remain anonymous.
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Men's club standing takes a hit but the Ladies love me... Which do you think I find more important?

Yamato wrote : I knew that my story was a bit rougher around the edges then was previously presented via Il Joker, Jimmy John, and of course RK Shooter. In no in way, shape, or form did I ever imagine it as a rape...I DO NOT condone rape at all. Amelie, in my mind was just a girl with frustrations via previous experiences ready to explode via a dominant man.

I just thought I'd present things in a more "realistic" way compared to the others authors and artists...(BTW: I absolutely love the other authors work too and I enjoy reading them).

Now having read all your comments to this point, would I have done some things differently? Yes probably. Do I have regrets? No I don't. I wish to thank you all, fellow sharkies, in return for your well thought out feedback.....and................here's my 2 cents I encourage and challenge all of you who have posted comments to create your stories and render them and to post them to our truly awesome community/family called Shark's Lagoon. I promise you it will be quite the challenge but will be quite worth every effort you put in it. If you can't render them, ask around ....find a buddy who can; it's been quite an experience for me and I've learned to truly have a deep appreciation of the great artists and authors like Il Joker, Jimmy John, and RK Shooter and not take their art for granted.

On a personal note, I also want to thank Goblinboy once again for the countless proofing, corrections, revisions, and questions I put him through. Goblinboy has incredible talent as everyone can attest to, whether it's AIF writing or rendering.

Cheers to everyone!

Kronn

slover2011 wrote : i am new, I dont see anytihng what am I missing? thanks!!!

slover2011 wrote : i am new, I dont see anytihng what am I missing? thanks!!!

Jackson wrote : Well the Link isn't too obvious.
At first I was a little confused aswell.

@slover: When you are in this thread click on "sharks lagoon" a little bit above (next to the link "Forum") This should be the easiest way.

thesaint00 wrote:Does it still exist?

thesaint00 wrote:Does it still exist?