Re: The Photoshoot

by **LRM** » Fri, 10Dec31 06:40

The 2 of you made a good team. The way I read the storyline did not indicate a dominant and submissive. It made me want to see your dominant violated more roughly than he dominated her! Just my 2¢ ([Alt]155 - United States Keyboard).
L

None of the Ladies have weighed in on this. Please I would like to see your take.

by **Arnulf** » Fri, 10Dec31 07:00

All in all, great compliment to Yamato and Goblinboy! As a summary to the themes, which have been discussed here, think of the fact, that it is only a game and therefore very entertaining and amusing!

by **LRM** » Sat, 11Jan01 06:22

I find this story very offensive. This was nothing in the world but RAPE. The idea that a woman can be raped and if it goes on long enough she will begin to enjoy it and gain satisfaction is pure male illusion. Perhaps no other injury can be as totally devastating to a woman as being raped, and they are injured. Some few, recover after it happens, but many are traumatized for life.

There have been times when I have fought my man till we have torn up the whole surroundings, but it was a sham battle and we knew that submission and surrender was the ultimate goal, regardless of which of us won. But in that Instance the very battle was part of the arousal. In a real rape, the fear and pain prevent arousal, which prevents lubrication, which induces great pain and physical damage.

This was PMed to me by a female member that asked to remain anonymous.
L
Men's club standing takes a hit but the Ladies love me... Which do you think I find more important?

by **Squeeky** » Sat, 11Jan01 06:54

LRM wrote :

This was PMed to me by a female member that asked to remain anonymous.
L
Men's club standing takes a hit but the Ladies love me... Which do you think I find more important?

I acknowledge and am in full respect of your correspondent's comment but I'd like to just offerthis article which does suggest that to some degree her last sentence is not truly accurate in ALL cases.

True, there are story elements which are confronting but we do need to consider "The Photoshoot" in some genuine context with my summary.

I'm sure that countermanding research could be offered but we are not here to debate those issues.

That said, I do not want to be seen to be stifling any female comment, I just wanted to attempt to offer a balanced perspective.

by **okimaon1** » Sat, 11Jan01 15:05

Yamato wrote : I knew that my story was a bit rougher around the edges then was previously presented via Il Joker, Jimmy John, and of course RK Shooter. In no in way, shape, or form did I ever imagine it as a rape...I DO NOT condone rape at all. Amelie, in my mind was just a girl with frustrations via previous experiences ready to explode via a dominant man.

I just thought I'd present things in a more "realistic" way compared to the others authors and artists...(BTW: I absolutely love the other authors work too and I enjoy reading them).

Now having read all your comments to this point, would I have done some things differently? Yes probably. Do I have regrets? No I don't. I wish to thank you all, fellow sharkies, in return for your well thought out feedback.....and................here's my 2 cents I encourage and challenge all of you who have posted comments to create your stories and render them and to post them to our truly awesome community/family called Shark's Lagoon. I promise you it will be quite the challenge but will be quite worth every effort you put in it. If you can't render them, ask around ....find a buddy who can; it's been quite an experience for me and I've learned to truly have a deep appreciation of the great artists and authors like Il Joker, Jimmy John, and RK Shooter and not take their art for granted.

On a personal note, I also want to thank Goblinboy once again for the countless proofing, corrections, revisions, and questions I put him through. Goblinboy has incredible talent as everyone can attest to, whether it's AIF writing or rendering.

Cheers to everyone!

Kronn

Just to add to my previous comment - I think the art work is amazing (I recongnize some eastern european porn actress face in there, it's impressive).
Maybe, just maybe if you had Amelie showing bit more enthusiasm about the Anal part, rather than just giving up to him, it would have worked more smoothly...
BTW, your courage to try something like this, rather than the usual "oh i've never tried this before...oh i think i like it". is refreshing.

You two are very good...I am hoping to see more of your collaboration in the near future.

OKI

by **il joker** » Tue, 11Jan04 07:09

Hi to all. First of all I would like to wish You all a happy and prosper new year, and I hope you are all good...
Second: I find this work fantastic, and I know, believe me, what kind of effort it takes (and what kind of computer....:-) ).
Third and last: are we really talking about morality? Really? I think we have all to take it easy...In the end it's only (...) an illustrated story, and I'm not here to judge using the morality lenses...I think we have all seen this kind of things before (RKShooter bounded Milly, for example, or my "Pinball").
If someone don't like this stories, nobody constrict them to read them, but, please, don't talk of morality...
Once again, terrific work.
Keep it up!!!

by **slover2011** » Sat, 11Jan08 11:10

i am new, I dont see anytihng what am I missing? thanks!!!

by **Squeeky** » Sat, 11Jan08 11:26

slover2011 wrote : i am new, I dont see anytihng what am I missing? thanks!!!

Too much salt in the water?

Haven't heard that one!

Put on your goggles and look around, and I do mean LOOK!

by **Greebo** » Sat, 11Jan08 13:14

slover2011 wrote : i am new, I dont see anytihng what am I missing? thanks!!!

Haven't you viewed the main sharks lagoon site, then? [img]images/icones/icon18.gif[/img]

by **Jackson** » Sat, 11Jan08 14:40

Well the Link isn't too obvious.
At first I was a little confused aswell.

@slover: When you are in this thread click on "sharks lagoon" a little bit above (next to the link "Forum") This should be the easiest way.

by **Squeeky** » Sat, 11Jan08 15:12

Jackson wrote : Well the Link isn't too obvious.
At first I was a little confused aswell.

@slover: When you are in this thread click on "sharks lagoon" a little bit above (next to the link "Forum") This should be the easiest way.

Hmm!
Seems like some are not very adventurous. Thank the heavens for pioneers!