Re: The Photoshoot

by **Yamato** » Fri, 10Dec03 15:54

Hi everyone, I'm the author of this story (I am Kronn) and as well Goblinboy is the artist...YES Goblinboy who wrote the AIF games School Dreams and Meteor having dozens of discussion pages in the "All Sexy Games" forum.

Enjoy!

The Photoshoot

by **Freddy** » Fri, 10Dec03 16:09

hehe well done man ! well done ! i like it a lot

by **Rastifan** » Fri, 10Dec03 16:13

Render looks good and concept seems promising. Looking forward to the rest:)

by **Greebo** » Fri, 10Dec03 16:49

Yamato wrote : Hi everyone, I'm the author of this story (I am Kronn) and as well Goblinboy is the artist...YES Goblinboy who wrote the AIF games School Dreams and Meteor having dozens of discussion pages in the "All Sexy Games" forum.

Enjoy!

Pardon me but where is this story to be found? There is no clue here and a simple Google doesn't find it

by **shark** » Fri, 10Dec03 17:40

Hey Greebo !
A GPS is not necessary to find your house...
In the lagoon, of course...

by **Greebo** » Fri, 10Dec03 18:14

Aah!

by **Freddy** » Fri, 10Dec03 18:16

by **phreaky** » Fri, 10Dec03 18:28

@yamato

Good one, waiting for the next part

by **Greebo** » Fri, 10Dec03 18:30

Hmm, very interesting, loads of promise and excellently implemented! Congratulations to the team

by **Squeeky** » Mon, 10Dec06 05:31

Hmm!
A little bit of gangland,
a girl pressured by waning occupational opportunities,
pressure to comply, to deliver ....

Short and all as is the dialogue I have to commend Yamato on presenting a scrïpt which has real life credibility. As for the graphical presentation Goblinboy has truly excelled in displaying the facial emotions of the characters.

I await the next delivery as do we all ....

by **okimaon1** » Mon, 10Dec06 21:34

Nice. Good Job!

by **shark** » Thu, 10Dec09 18:06

Hey ! no comments on chapter 2 ???

by **Rastifan** » Thu, 10Dec09 19:00

Chapter two was such a tease. More please:)

by **garbalex** » Thu, 10Dec09 19:22

I agree!

Great art by goblinboy (not a great surprise, his games were really great too)
The story is good but please, I want the next chapter soon !

I can't wait ^^

by **Greebo** » Thu, 10Dec09 23:34

Yeah, it's going well! I wonder when she's going to stop shying, and start letting her excitement take over from her unease. Is he going to let her go and tempt her back for more, or are his 'sponsors' going to want him to reel her in in one extended session, until she's too hyped up to deny him anything?

There were a couple of words misspelt, but otherwise yamato's text and storyline are superb, complementing goblinboy's art beautifully.

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