Need a Native English Corrector.

Hey.
I wrote a scene for the game on which I work. I translated it as I could.
But I need a help of a native speaker (English). For check.
It's a small scene. 820 characters.
Sincerely, Blue.
I wrote a scene for the game on which I work. I translated it as I could.
But I need a help of a native speaker (English). For check.
It's a small scene. 820 characters.
Sincerely, Blue.