game project: room 112

[ttant]

Nice job

[Super]

I tried playing and got to the part where I had the girl masturbating and then a guy walked in to her apartment randomly and start filming her and this somehow made her the biggest slut and ruined her future law career.

Yeah, I know it's porn and a game, but that was too big a leap of logic for me to take So yeah, I'd recommend, well, not doing something like that. Because as is, I couldn't really bother continuing after that. but story is an important part of these games for me, so eh. Your call I guess.

[BobbyTally]

I tried playing and got to the part where I had the girl masturbating and then a guy walked in to her apartment randomly and start filming her and this somehow made her the biggest slut and ruined her future law career.

Yeah, I know it's porn and a game, but that was too big a leap of logic for me to take So yeah, I'd recommend, well, not doing something like that. Because as is, I couldn't really bother continuing after that. but story is an important part of these games for me, so eh. Your call I guess.

You were in the wrong path and just lost the game. You could try to prevent anyone entering in the room.

[Super]

I tried playing and got to the part where I had the girl masturbating and then a guy walked in to her apartment randomly and start filming her and this somehow made her the biggest slut and ruined her future law career.

Yeah, I know it's porn and a game, but that was too big a leap of logic for me to take So yeah, I'd recommend, well, not doing something like that. Because as is, I couldn't really bother continuing after that. but story is an important part of these games for me, so eh. Your call I guess.

You were in the wrong path and just lost the game. You could try to prevent anyone entering in the room.

That's not my point. It's the fact that that path exists at all that makes me not want to continue.

[tonytiger]

Hi Bobby, thanks for the update. The graphics are still top notch and am enjoying the extra scene. In answer to Super's comments above I find a touch harsh, the ending is just a way of explaining that you have missed something on that play thorugh as the game is quite hard to find hit points of which one is certainly timed. Is it logical?? possibly not but hardly worth dismissing the game over in my opinion (who wouldn't be embarassed to be filmed, the guy's a dick). The games replayability comes from the harshness of the failures, one wrong selection likely ends the game, probably not to everyones likeing coupled with the small hit points but for me this makes a more interesting game then chaotics latest.
Bug: Bobby, the bottom 2 selections after "do you masterbate" reset you to the start screen while keeping your previous score.
Going forward, I hope you add a bit more interactivity and story as when you know the route from start to sex with megan can be done in a minute while the story is nice it is a bit short some teaser and again interaction instead of just clicking thorugh screens would be my ideal.
Keep up the work, cant wait for more.

[BobbyTally]

Thank you tonytiger for your comments.

The bug you mentionned has been corrected (go to first post of the discussion for downloads).

[ltpika]

I tried playing and got to the part where I had the girl masturbating and then a guy walked in to her apartment randomly and start filming her and this somehow made her the biggest slut and ruined her future law career.

Yeah, I know it's porn and a game, but that was too big a leap of logic for me to take So yeah, I'd recommend, well, not doing something like that. Because as is, I couldn't really bother continuing after that. but story is an important part of these games for me, so eh. Your call I guess.

You were in the wrong path and just lost the game. You could try to prevent anyone entering in the room.

That's not my point. It's the fact that that path exists at all that makes me not want to continue.

Shouldn't have to be censored just for you. Don't go down that path if you don't like it.

This is a great game, hope to see it go farther

[Bonhomie]

I have a suspicion I am not getting to the proper end?
Thought I had tried all the options, but seen a hint I might not have.

I have locked the door and then get a knock, but it pretty much ends soon after when there is a choice of two below the picture, and one is 'greyed out' and cannot be selected.
The score in the top corner also stays at '0' - is that supposed to change?

However I really like what I have seen - it reminds me of early chaotic stuff where various sized hot spots led you on different paths, and finding them all was part of the fun and playability.

[BobbyTally]

I have a suspicion I am not getting to the proper end?
Thought I had tried all the options, but seen a hint I might not have.

I have locked the door and then get a knock, but it pretty much ends soon after when there is a choice of two below the picture, and one is 'greyed out' and cannot be selected.
The score in the top corner also stays at '0' - is that supposed to change?

It is good to know that you liked what you have seen so far. And yes, you missed something...

Just after you have locked the door there is two possible hotspots...

[redle]

I tried playing and got to the part where I had the girl masturbating and then a guy walked in to her apartment randomly and start filming her and this somehow made her the biggest slut and ruined her future law career.

Yeah, I know it's porn and a game, but that was too big a leap of logic for me to take So yeah, I'd recommend, well, not doing something like that. Because as is, I couldn't really bother continuing after that. but story is an important part of these games for me, so eh. Your call I guess.

I'd agree that the storyline on this ending went a bit over the top. It's a story about a girl pleasuring herself in her own bed and suddenly we're told that her life is effectively over; ruined beyond redemption. The "future" story isn't at the same level as the "current" story we were playing. It might have been better if the scope of the ending matched the scope of the game. Still it isn't unheard of for games/stories to claim that one given moment is a person's major, life pivot-point. This could be her point. If it is, though, there could be a bit more intro story to prepare the player to the idea that this is such a moment (and then all the endings would need the "how her life went" briefing).

That said, it is conceivable that this could be how the story would actually play out. She could come from conservative parents and a small town. The school she attends could have rather strict morality clauses in the bylaws. Other students could just be overly cruel, send her into a deep depression (of which maybe she was already teetering), and things spiral down from there. The story script certainly just gives the minimalist synopsis of the full tale, but who wants to read a 20 page ending story on the bad end. The game is too short to justify an overly long ending story. (Although it does also depend a bit how the player interprets the use of "slut" here. If one views it as her actually becoming a slut instantly because some pictures were taken of her, well that isn't realistic at all. If one views it as, people that don't know her now think of her as a slut after seeing the images, that is quite possible. Of course the guy in the room didn't do any of this anonymously and could easily have his life completely ruined by this event also)

Either way, I find this to be a fun little home-alone game. Glad to see it's still being moved along.

[BobbyTally]

Thanks to those who puts comments here. I really appreciate both positive and negative critisms and I always take them into account. It is very important for game developers to have feedbacks of what they have done. Unfortunately, there is not many of them here. I don't know yet if I will continue to develop the game.

cheers
Bobby

[Rexxx]

I didn't think that could have add some interesting comment, so I hadn't done until now.
The graphic is beautiful, the beginning is a bit strange, even if became interesting very quickly, whether you have to seduce a man for his silence or a girl, because you like her, but the story is still a bit incomplete to express a true opinion.

[j95]

Hello BobbyTally,

I think that your game is very good, (very good and detailed graphics, very interesting storyline, handwritten text), only adding a bit more background to the introduction and endings, stops it from being an exceptional game.

I was extremely pleased to see an update, for this game, as any very good, new or continued games are always greatly appreciated.

I hope very much that you will decide to finish this game and I am sure that all of the other members think the same.

j95

Justin

[Rexxx]

I agree for a bit longer introduction, if she, for example, think about the creepy guy in room 114 and the sexy girl in room 111 one can feel more normal the presence of the twos and the need to masturbate, the sex can be good, but a bit of foreplay can make it better.

[BobbyTally]

So i am going to work on the story to make it more interesting, and possibly more realistic.

Thank you guys for your relevant advices.

cheers
Bobby