Thoughts on the new edition.
I really like your art. The shower scene is great. He does have a very active imagination.
There are a couple more questions to help promote your business. This is good. The biggest problem I see is the choice of professions and how it is implemented. Most games you go to work and earn some amount of money just by showing up. Because you have picked a customer forward business like a car dealership and can only make money when a customer arrives, you will need to make lots of graphics to support the amount of random customers coming in. It might take away from time better spent on other parts of the game. Maybe you could do a random chance of selling based on the computer score when you chose sell cars and just report a sale or not, saving the need to generate lots of one off customers. Right now you could keep the fantasize about Vanessa, Do Jennifer, choices and instead of the nothing box, another sell cars box that would give the result of the "random" chance.
In the bank and in the theater, you reuse dialog as placeholders right now. Some of the bank replies look like coffee shop replies and don't make sense for the characters yet.
Jennifer's Love Icon seems to hang around still. After getting her level up a ways, entering the theater starts with her icon displayed and then switches to the icon of the woman you are there with.
I'm not sure if I can give money to the thugs as I had given it all to the bank before the garage showed up on the map. Plus the bank took all my money on the first deposit, even the $100 I had started with. How am I going to pay for all those movies that I will never pay attention too?

At least the coffee still comes with benefits...
I can't wait till there is more content in the theater as they both seem to want a part of him, hence the not paying attention thing from above.
More Vanessa please, his imagination is just not enough.
I can continue to raise Love Level in the bank by asking questions now, though I don't know if there will be trigger levels for events yet.
If I keep training, will I be able to beat up the goons by myself?
It's good to hear about a dirty cop, now for the hot rookie in her tight uniform, think Reno 911 hot pants (it's just a thought!)
There is now a Health slider though I don't recall it moving too much and it is a little hard to see. I didn't notice it at first.
Thanks for fixing the 5 hour coffee shop visits, not that I minded spending so much time with her, but we are very busy and need to get things done.
I would like at least the time of day displayed on the map screen. I now know about how long an event will take but I can't tell what time it is until I reach a destination.
Will you add a window where I can see the love levels of the women in the game?
It is a fine start and I can start to see where this is going. Keep up the good work.